Was there a change of artist? I'm asking bc i knows it can happen and because the art got worse but mostly for the bottom. The top is still always hot but it's not really a much bother bc the story is so good so you don't really think about it and it took me time to realize it personally.
why my comment keep disappearing is there words banned here?
I tried to read it. A lot of times i don't trust comments bc i ended up liking the stories but this time meh... i stopped at chapter 10. I like when bottom have at least a bit of personality or something about themselves. There's 40 chapters and they're already sleeping together. I'm not gonna keep reading but i already see it coming.
The bottom is gonna go to the army and even with all the time apart as soon he come back a nd the top make a move they will be sleeping together.
Idk the story and art isn't extraordinary and i need something to make me want to stay when the story is cliché. I'm not hating but there's nothing that make want to keep reading.
it's back yaaay now time to wait for months for more chapters to release before reading again lol
The art is good but the story isn't great honestly. If you want a quick story with smutt well idk if i would recommend it? honestly the smutt isn't the best in my opinion. It wasn't that interresting. I rec if you want a short story and not think. But if the author worked the story better it would have been good bc i see the potential.
I like stories, toxic or not, where you feel the love between the character but their love? It go too fast. Like it start with the smutt, then flasback, of hey hey knew each other before, BAM smutt with no build up, oh hey you thought he hated him bc of the first smutt scene? No actually he always loved him since young??? The bottom knew that but he ended up forgetting him ??? Oh smutt and they start dating. Honnestly if feel like a story that you start to have in you head and you explain the main points to your friend but instead to working it out you start to write it right away and that's it.
thank you so much for updating!! it wasn't confusing at all
the way i usually notice detail but i had to see the comments to realize there were twins
There's nothing i actually hate but idk i don't like the top. Is it his looks? his personality? idk i just don't like him
Sometimes it's nice to read story when it's not 100% about romance
i shouldn't have but damn i laughed when i saw that blond girl face lmaooo
where does the official chapter come from ? bc i tried to search the carrotoon site but i can't even find it
The story is interresting but i feel like it had more potential and could have lasted more than 19 chapters
Honestly it could have been better if there was moments showing them being a family Like what's the point to make a story mpreg if it's for the child to call their parents masters and say "never acted as my mother". Like i started to read this bc of the pic of the child and expected to see cute family moments. And the miscommunication was annoying but i kept reading bc of the baby but oh well. The story isn't bad bad but it could have been better
you can cry at every new chapter posted but meanwhile we're getting an anime lmao
if anyone speak french it's gonna be published in french in june by crunchyroll kaze Idk if it's gonna be published in english sorry