I’m not convinced even the author knows where the story is going anymore. They’ve introduced a good amount of characters by now that seem to have their own uses as plot devices (chairman, half brother, other heiress, Ari, etc.) but they shuffle so incoherently between them, lose momentum with the drama and storytelling, and give us flashback after flashback that are just not impactful. The beginning had me hooked but now it’s such a bore. I wished the author mapped out the story better and actually had a clear vision of the story they wanted to deliver. It just seems they have a bunch of ideas they jotted down threw into a bag, shook it up, and just write whichever comes out.
Author is so interested in showing their past and I’m not really invested. Mincheol’s actions and his nasty attitude/personality towards Haesoo is already irredeemable. The only part of the past I really want to see is that ultrasound photo (I’m guessing they lost their baby?) and when she meets Taeha that rainy day. Author’s chapters are all over the place and not following through with so many storyline points. They definitely could have mapped it out better because there was a lot of potential.
It’s simple. This story contains SA and rape. If that’s not your cup of tea or if you are a minor, this story is not meant for you. Stop reading. This story contains dark elements. These are all intentional by the author. This is not a regurgitation of the original Eros and psyche story. Which should be obvious since it’s not following the original events.







The push and pull of this story over and over this same ambiguous teetering is so not cute. Like please author we want actually plot. It’s torture. Every update I can’t help but be a tiny bit hopeful for development or something happening finally, but every time I’m left disappointed. The story has so much potential to go many interesting directions, but we’re still being taken nowhere.