I thought this would be a short and neat story but it's dragging out more than I thought. This depiction of love is so shallow, maybe it'd be better if the author stopped focusing of sex every other chapter and focus on improving the plot, character building and storytelling. I have nothing against a flawed protagonist but I'm seeing no logic or emotion flow, it feels like victor is acting so emotionally charged for plot devices ┑(￣Д ￣)┍好无聊诶
This shit is so ass, I hope the artist takes some class in storytelling and read more books for inspiration cuz wtf the art had so much potential too
Damn the story is so shit, the art is bearable uncensored or not doesn't make a difference to me but the unshaded nipples are distracting. The uke have 0 braincells and naive as fuck we don't kno what he wants and he can he do. The seme is an asshole and we don't kno why he even likes the uke bruh I should have stopped at chapter 6 the sex ain't even that good
Letting you know the author died (￣∇￣")
So?
Just because they've passed, it doesn’t make a difference to their work. Criticism doesn't include pity points
Oml you sound terrible (￣∇￣") imma go watch cat vids to cleanse this evil
No one mentioned it but it's kinda stupid to be homo holding hands near a church yiel wtf
No, being homophobic it is
Yea you right being homophobic is hilarious
The mc's brain is so smooth without growing a wrinkle at any Junction of the story. It started slow which is no problem if the author spent that time establishing the mc's good points and why we should like him instead of just pushing the narrative that he's so pitiful cuz of shitty dad uwuwu, he's supposedly an actor but his acting sucks? Having agreed to be in a pretend relationship with ML and he can't even act the part or make the initiative to find more details about his "contractual relationship" from either ML(who doesn't want this to fail) or the secretary? Idk why he chose to become an actor where you owe money to the company producing you rather than seekin out other part time jobs to pay back the debt and leave his shitfy family. It's almost like he has no brain and no self initiative preservation. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ I skipped through parts of the story to see if there's any improvement on the MC's part but all I see is him doing stupid shit each time.
ML and MC have -1000 chemistry, maybe it's cuz of the mc's -10 communication skills and the ML's 30/10 indifference
it’s just a story, if you try and dissect every story every single time you read something you will not have a good time. learn to enjoy things
I don't try and dissect everything I read. Everytime I read, I go in with a brainless mode and even then some stories hit even lower then that no brain line. I've read more nonsensical stories and enjoyed them nonetheless. I'm just expressing my opinion on this story cuz of the failed potential and execution. But the saying goes, a man's trash is another man's treasure ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Just because they don't enjoy this particular story don't mean they dissect every story they read and don't enjoy things at all Some people actually like to dissect every nonsensical thing in stories like these, it's not a bad thing, people don't all read for the same purposes. Plus the story is not that great, and what op said is true
don’t see the point in you chiming in but okay ig
Womp womp nga
keep wasting your time by being rude to someone you’ll never meet online
Keep crying
i understand the notion, but i cant agree less with it.
okay…?
get a life
You sought out a random comment of mine then proceeded to reply with "womp womp." you need to get a life
AND you I can't directly respond to you meaning you blocked me yet you're STILL responding to me lmfao
"This manga is about Not discriminating between sexes! alpha and omega are equal!!"
"Also here is us one page later discriminating against betas."
No brain, everyone have the same face, idek wtf they all wanted. Anyway I read the first chapter, knew I won't make sense of wutever they're on and skipped to ch6. Ahaha wtf is this drama
People who cant get over the fact that fictional stories contain rape shouldn't be reading this
its not the rape that triggers people. its the reaction to it. fictional rape and dubious consent can be hot, but the author simply ruined it here. the reason for it and the response to it.
But if they already know and SEEN the warning, they shouldn't be reading it in the first place if they were gonna react like this. Wether this is some kind of new consent thing, doesn't matter.
Like they said its not the rape its the reaction and response from the main couple is what triggers some people
I was fooled by the synopsis thinking that this might be a plot action focused story exploring one guide for a group of esper and poly relationships. But that's far from the case. It's just long chapters of sex more sex and sex with the plot and world building squeezed in between.
The most glaring problem for me is the MC. He's poorly written imo. What's his goal, his motivation, his means to achieve are wishy washy. He doesn’t show any ability apart from being able to guide(have sex) really well and high compatibility. Esper and guides ranking is only relevant so you can see class discrimination in the beginning for MC and his bro, the real ranking is MC group >>>>>> every other esper. And the worst part is there's a lot of talk and exposition. MC will say something to offend and rile people and then ask why they're treating him like crap and be shocked that these violent espers are violent and he intentionally provoked them. Most of the time, if he's not crying and scared during sex then he's being depressed and scared during dungeons and he'll still act like he has some ability to bargain with espers who can easily force him to guide and this doesn't improve. We're told that he'd been train to enter dungeons and find out in 4 chapters that he can't even do emergency guiding when they're in deep crack core at the boss battle or defend himself in combat. Honestly there's a lot more I can say about him but the tldr, he's lacklustre and have no qualities that would make you empathise or understand him unless you really care for your brother who has been shown as nothing but a deadweight.
A guide growing in a dungeon world don't know the basics of his abilities that's just bad world building. Most of the world building is shown through exposition, I'm sure the artist and author tried their best to convey their vision and themes but it feels shallow and missed for me. The story boarding and pacing is a mess that I sometimes think I missed a page or clicked on the wrong chapter. The artist gave a lot of explanations and thoughts in their creator notes on how to adapt that world but the themes they're talking about feels so far and missed in what I've actually read.
ML(s) are very stereotypical and not interesting or as deep as the author hints you into believing. Paired with this MC, i feel no chemistry or any pulling points to keep being invested in who he ends up with if that was even up in the air.
If you're interested in lots of sex, you should read it but don't expect it to give anymore than fast food surface dugeong raid.