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There were so many poorly executed plots my god. We never knew what happened to the guy at the beginning who fired his dad or the lawsuit. The top I didn't get what punishment the top got from his past life, like, he just got to reincarnate unto a rich family and found his love again while the bottom was killed in his past life, came back struggling and got with the top while struggling a bit more. The cousin who frame the top didn't get retribution or anything. Like everything went so ficking fast... This was overall a bad story and I'm so pissed because I rarely type when I don't like something but I was expecting so much more.
Loved the idea POOR EXCECUTION (▰˘◡˘▰)
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I agree! The story and plot idea is good but feels like a rough draft. It's missing a lot and was very rushed. Same with the art, it's not bad but could use some fine tuning. But what I dislike the most is the fact the uke didn't really like the seme at all and then all of a sudden did a complete 180. I personally don't really enjoy slow burn but give us some sort of development before diving into you're the love of my life lol it cracked me up that the seme was like let me mark you! and the next scene was them just finding out their ages then going right back to "I love you so much" like do y'all even know each other's favorite color? Food?? Movie??? Had great potential but fell short unfortunately. Still enjoyed it though!
I hated the bottom so much at the beginning, he was so fucking dense and naive and a doormat, like play your character properly the dude is being so clear. And also that thing about pride which is a recurring theme in asian media, like dude your dad is trash, you've been raped by debt collectors because of him and your are paying for him when a rich dude appears and offers you a great deal (because you insist on trying acting when I'm sure you would havs had a better time working in something with a better steady income) and you are still thinking about your pride, like come on.
Anyways, the story became much better as time progressed although the top was flavorless to me, he needed more development in his character.
I liked that the dad died, but I would have preferred to see him suffer more or trying to redeem himself only to die anyway but o well it was good in the end.
Overall it was a good story, not life changing, the best thing was the art, that elevates the score so much. It's not even that long so I recommend it.