This was bad honestly, the mc spent the whole time just doing nothing and the few people that he killed were just npcs nothing more. At no point he delayed or frustrated any of the enemys plans and when they say it did there's no explanation. I think the writer just wanted to come up with a surprise finale or something because the ending is obviosly rushed. At least kill one of the 3 enemys or let the enemy cut an arm or hand of the enemys companions to make it more entertaining and showing idk revenge or forgiveness. Also at no point any explanation what the deal was between the bad guys and the princess and her reaction at knowing she was helping the bad guys, like wtf and thats without mentioning if he was blushing in ch. 12 or 13 because oohh a female character or is it because he's just embarrased and other comments have also touched on that.
overall not really worth it. very dissapionting. ( ̄へ ̄)
Ok so thankfully I read the comments sooner. I was already side eyeing the story when again a pushover character just goes along with what his parent say and the other dude is clearly a douche and then he goes to meet them with a vibrator inside, like, out if nowhere. And then I go to read the last page to spoil myself as usual to see if it's worth the read but it end like meh.
Thank you to all the comments with much more insight also.
I hate when somebody warns you of something but don't give any kind of details. Why would you hire someone and not be specific, tell them there's weird shit happening or move the sheep to somewhere else. I get this one is about the symbolism but the lack of information pisses me off. Entertaining overall.
I can't believe it ended like this. I'm so disappointed.
The art and smut were one if not the best out there and the story looked great and promising but idk where it went wrong. The end was rushed and we didn't see so much that was resolved behind the scenes and unless is developed in the extras... Ufff sad to have to lower my rating. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I hated the bottom so much at the beginning, he was so fucking dense and naive and a doormat, like play your character properly the dude is being so clear. And also that thing about pride which is a recurring theme in asian media, like dude your dad is trash, you've been raped by debt collectors because of him and your are paying for him when a rich dude appears and offers you a great deal (because you insist on trying acting when I'm sure you would havs had a better time working in something with a better steady income) and you are still thinking about your pride, like come on.
Anyways, the story became much better as time progressed although the top was flavorless to me, he needed more development in his character.
I liked that the dad died, but I would have preferred to see him suffer more or trying to redeem himself only to die anyway but o well it was good in the end.
Overall it was a good story, not life changing, the best thing was the art, that elevates the score so much. It's not even that long so I recommend it.
There were so many poorly executed plots my god. We never knew what happened to the guy at the beginning who fired his dad or the lawsuit. The top I didn't get what punishment the top got from his past life, like, he just got to reincarnate unto a rich family and found his love again while the bottom was killed in his past life, came back struggling and got with the top while struggling a bit more. The cousin who frame the top didn't get retribution or anything. Like everything went so ficking fast... This was overall a bad story and I'm so pissed because I rarely type when I don't like something but I was expecting so much more.
I agree! The story and plot idea is good but feels like a rough draft. It's missing a lot and was very rushed. Same with the art, it's not bad but could use some fine tuning. But what I dislike the most is the fact the uke didn't really like the seme at all and then all of a sudden did a complete 180. I personally don't really enjoy slow burn but give us some sort of development before diving into you're the love of my life lol it cracked me up that the seme was like let me mark you! and the next scene was them just finding out their ages then going right back to "I love you so much" like do y'all even know each other's favorite color? Food?? Movie??? Had great potential but fell short unfortunately. Still enjoyed it though!










If he's going to save even the bad guys, what's the point. I guess is good enough.