1. it seems like the alpha already had feelings for the omega early on, like he gets jealous and wants to be with him all the time. and them the pregnancy made he realize and act on the feelings
- the omega though i dont think he ever hated the alpha just was indifferent and thought he was hot, then they got prego and started to actually have feelings
2. amnesia plots are sooo stupid, this one is too. like whats the point traumatizing the children like they be like ya our dad forgot and left us bc he didnt love us anymore but its ok bc hes back now.
3. honestly the amnesia plot would have been good if the alpha always had like a crush on the omega but thought they wouldnt get anywhere bc he was a beta so when he wakes up with amnesia forgetting everything and then learns they are married and have kids, he is like overly loving and childish in the way he loves the omega. just being more open about how he is just so happy that they are together and stupid shy. Then the omega would learn like he has liked me for a long time and didnt just marry me bc i was prego yk and its a cuter plot, and more fun to explore then us having to read them fall apart after we just got the happy ending yk
When he told him "release your phermones" i felt the pang or when he told him something about surely staying married together just for the kids was devastating, but it explored one thing the alpha is an ass and was an ass, it an asshole loving someone and masking his assholeness cause he know it will break his family if he isnt actually nice i mean good for the omega
1. i like how they are childish. they feel like high schoolers they are stupid and goofy and emotional its cute
2. oof emotional. running away from eachother for two years
glad they are happy now even though we dont really get to see much of it
3. the glasses guy and sunny are cute. Glasses taking them off when he is trying to lie to sunny bout his feels is a cute detail
4. same for this couple like why a year break like author there are 2 chapters left what are we doing, it like the author just needs every thing to end on a kind of sad note like dont worry theyre fine but that was close right
5. anyways it was good
1. its cute
2. there are darker themes but they arent explored too deeply so the story stays on a more light hearted side
3. want sides of the other friends or just more of them bc they are cute
4. im happy we get to see Gilhan get happy. I dont know why ppl dont like his future partner he seems fine
1. yikes the faces do not fit into the head. but its lowkey funny bc the artist can draw side profiles fine and the face looks normal but straight on its just like oop a lil to much chin there and too much side of the face lol
2. the plot is interesting kind of a time reverse is fun
3. chp 11 what a jump into the imagination like no warning
4.knocked the slippers off him hahah (chp 12)
5. chp 20 the first time we see noona even though he is like im soo happy to be back and she her but 20 chps in is the first time we are introduced to her its just crazy bc i dont really believe you man its been weeks and you have only texted her she should have been the first person we were introduced to
6. he wakes up from being out for months and they get it on in the hospital right away crazy decision
7. yea it was fine. not bad not great idk
1. i like how his hair and clothing choices are representative of where he is - he had long hair in the elf kingdom and they cut it to a shorter style for the human kingdom
2. maybe i read to many isekai stories but the age thing is not really a problem to me
- tess is the one to really start things with the kiss
- Arthur stops most of the heavy romance when they are younger so im glad he is the one to kick start it now that they are older bc its some chasing on his side after just accepting all these years
3. honstly i dont get why is such a big deal like yea shocking that he remembers his past life but he is still a reborn there for new person yk. like the yrs dont transfer he get to restart the clock bc he died
4. like idk how the odds are in favor of them winning bc it seems like they can barely fight eachother without dying and Arthur is getting his ass handed to him every fight
5. lowkey the only way they winning is if a good amount of the V change sides to help them win
6. its more training and arthur is losing sooooo yikes
- chp 222
1. trying to read after not liking it the first time
2. the story is fine its just the same thing over and over but the romance is cute and the mc is likable
3. chapter 50 and im so bored i dont think there is conflict like every one likes her and no one is really plotting behind her back soo what are we doing
- imma drop it. i dont care the mc is not working through a hard ship to get to a happier life she is already in the happy life and she adding to it which is great but more exciting story have the mc in a hole and we watch the dig out and it interesting lol hopefully that made sense
- its not a bad story obvs its just calm
1. wish they made her younger idk why she had to be 17ish and him 13 she could have been 13-15 and the story in the age aspect would have been better and it would not have changed much in the dynamics of characters and stuff.
- or he could have been older like the age 13 had no significance in his age either she could have been 15-16
3. the broke the curse really early
4. skin toned lips, dont bite or your lips will be pale. sorry sir they already are
5. the mc kind of annoys me bc she is like oh liandro i want him to be happy and in love and wishing the best for him but she doesnot love him, usually in a story like this the mc already loves the idea and book persona of a character and then they fall deeper in love with all the side they didnt know about. but girly here just felt such a strong pity and ig connection that she wanted in the story but not for him to gain a connection with her but for him to connect with ours. and like girl if he does leave his affections for you what are you gonna do? work as a maid forever
- and i get like age gap cant get into a relationship this early and thats why the ages should be changed
6. so is elalina is princess from this other country bc even the names are similar
7.chp 75 lowkey bored. this crown prince arc is sooo boring and unless he kills someone i dont care he is unnecessary just like lorenzo. and also he is the main character of the og story so he is not going to be a villain yk so we know hes not going to do anything
8. wish diego got a happy ending like he really didnt do anything wrong except be a jerk to the elenora
9. the sides are silly its just the kids
10. anyways the story was fine kind of boring but atleast it was short and didnt drag for 200 chapters
it was good, hoping for side stories bc i need more romance.
fastest final boss battle ever though like damn one shot kill everything
i liked the "twist" and stuff wish it was explored a little more with her father and mother like was her mother another reincarnation or what idk ig it doesnt matter
the demon bulter was so random like did he have a significant role he came for one liners and then left i thought he was going to be big bad bc of how little his role was, and is he dead now that magic is gone
but yea would read again it was cute and the art was good











1. uglest hair cut ever like good lord
- and like the charracter is good looking but the hair takes him down sooo many levels it crazy
2. lowkey mad, like the bottom is mad bc the top was in one past relationship and they are still friends, but like my guy you have been in multiple relationships as well, and sure he didnt tell you he was gay but thats his choice it never affected you, until you caught him, and now your punishing him for ? not telling you soon? not letting you be his only one? like what do you want. He just wants to top to be sad like the top probably has been sad enough and now what you want sex but dont want to defined the relationship. We might ruin our friendship guess what too late. you have been confessed to and yall have had sex there is no going back
- ugh im still mad. the bottom just asked the top "have you never cried", after he reminisces bout them talking bout the future, where he wants kids and that their future kids should be best friends, normally this is fine but knowing what you know now you should be able to read his silence from then, how he is thinking of never having a future like that with you and having to just be happy for you
- another thing ghosting a friend is the fakest thing ever, like sure he is the tops first so i get not wanting to be close with him, even though that is weak but also understandable when you caught them kissing not long ago, it still is rude to just ghost and ignore him
- AND im also mad at the top for being so secretive bout his past, like you have been found out and now the person you claim to love is trying to wrap his head around this hidden relationship and you are like vague and misleading bout it. like my guy you suck tooo
3. i honestly cant believe it closes on that ending. like it was just stupid like they are so icky. the top forever sorry and will make it up to him, the the bottom is clueless and insecure on what that means
4. lastly what even developed the bottom confesses at random in the last chapter and the top cries like give me something emotional. Their time "apart" should have been done better, like the story starts with the bottom being broken up with bc he is so attached to his best friend, but the whole story its like the bottom is jealous and whats the top to only be into him, but them he doesnt want to date and is confused about how he feels, like what!!! the top pisses me off too dont get me started,
- but i think the story would have been better with a double perspective, we dont get to see what the top is really thinking bout. it would have been nice to see what the top was thinking in his decisions and during emotional moments
- the story ends with both of them still being insecure in their relationship. what kind of ending is that. the top is scared the bottom will wake up wanting to be straight again and the bottom is scared that he is making the wrong choice. thats what the time apart should have been used as the bottom realizing he doesnt ever want to be away from the top and he likes this life they have and that being together in a more intimate way makes him happy. But it was used to make the top sorry! idk why though. for the top the time apart should have been him confessing everything hes been holding in for TEN years, the do you ever cry, was the perfect time for the top to unload feeling scared, alone, sad, ashamed!! like these feelings could end our friendship, i cant tell my bff that im gay, and he was ashamed of everything, which is why now he is just apologizing and telling the bottom he wont regret choose him? what?! having to convince your partner and yourself that you will be happy is crazy and not healthy like