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this would be a much more enjoyable read if the FL wasn’t such a useless character. If the plot was gonna be system based why wouldn’t they give the MC some type of perks or bonus abilities even though she’s supposed to pose as the saintess. Or at least have the system explain more of what she can be capable of…

She keeps putting herself in these situations where she is essentially dead weight. she keeps investigating alone and actively confronting people when she literally has no means to protect herself or others then expects not to be retaliated against…? She tried to “sneak” into all these places to get caught everytime. The FL feels extremely dumb, naive, and useless F tier character writing

the severe logic jumps from the MC makes this genuinely such a hard read it’s hard to keep going. I had to just turn my brain off to get through that 1st three chapters…I get that it could be due to trauma and a lack of empathy she experienced but as an adult and teacher the her comprehension and cognitive ability is SEVERELY diminished.

I get that transmigration or whatever could be hard for someone to comprehend, especially coming from the modern world but i fear her logic jumps ARE SO STUPID. At no point does the world give any indication at her being in a game with a fully set trajectory that must be followed. so when she decides to change things that ofc changes the flow of the world how can she be surprised about that…LIKE DUH WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN

for someone who is supposedly good at hooking people up together and being compassionate and empathetic she ALWAYS fails to see how the characters truly feel about everyone they are interacting with, it’s not fucking rocket science. okay i’m done with my rant it’s only cuz i feel this had so much potential but is so aggravating (╬￣皿￣)

i really wish the friend was the ML i think sehrin is a better ML for kiara then the duke. it would be alot more entertaining too

CHAPTER 63 — and continuing cuz i’m bored

At first the FL was the one who wasn’t rlly doing it for me she was smart but was still making dumb rationalizations about the world, especially after it was proven during multiple occasions that she didn’t have all the facts and the novel wasn’t a “know all guide” to how the world would progress ESPECIALLY SINCE SHE WAS ACTIVELY CHANGING THE STORY OF COURSE THINGS WILL BE DIFFERNT…but i digress. She was quick to judge the original duchesses actions without even understanding her intentions and just let her misconceptions about everything dictate how she acted with people and things in the world EVEN AFTER seeing the og duchesses memories she was still talking down about her (┛`д´)┛… which brings me to the point of the ML he’s actually a fucking man child who does nothing but have temper tantrums and everything is “me me me” when it comes to him. After completely berating and mocking the og Erina who he knew was also spiteful and only had 3 people she could trust in the world just to save his fragile ego HAD THE NERVE to be mad at her for being spiteful and using him to climb her way out the hell whole that was her life. THEN the only reason he started liking her again was due to the FL acting like the og Erina before he completely destroyed the only comfort she had in the world. He’s just a man child loser who can’t take accountability for his actions and expects everybody to bend to his will because he said so but “iM nOT a TyRAnt yOu aRe eRinA”

This story had the potential to be so good but every author insists on making the FL some naive stupid b whose brain is just an accessory. She claims she wants to live a carefree life but does anything but that she continues to meet the original characters even after saying she wants nothing to do with them as well as actively making it her problem.

If she just took one moment to use her pews brain she’d realize all the “problems” around her are easily fixable or they’re NONE OF HER BUSINESS! she said it before reality is different from words on a page yet she continues to go in circles making stupid assumptions and jumping to conclusions when the facts were right in front of her and she still manages to be wrong…f**k off fr had the fl been better this book could be so good

given that she’s the first smart female lead i’ve seen in a while i rlly hope she’s just leading those sibling on to later destroy that kingdom. I want her to be ruthless (┛`д´)┛I NEED CARNAGE AND MURDER CRUSH THEM LIKE ANTSS

she should’ve below their castle to smithereens as soon as she woke up