The art is great! Except for inconsistent lighting at ballroom scenes where it's supposed to be night outside but from the inside of the ballroom the windows look bright as day (but this is a very niche complaint and I don't see it bothering other people.)
The story was not exciting. Anything that could have been a challenge (having to find the memories by herself, figuring out the exact nature of her relationship with her maternal family, starting to gain assets for her independence in a meaningful way) was stripped from the very beginning so she didn't have to do anything that would stray from collecting "her beauties", which resulted in her doing absolutely nothing of substance. The ML's fell fast and with little build up. If the romance was going to be the thing that carried the story, it flopped. One of the things that bothered me the most was her cluelessness to how her "terminal illness" was affecting other people emotionally. It is understandable for her to be more chill about it since she knows she is not going to die, but to see other people in distress over it and just go " I don't get why they're sad," made her look dumb and emotionally unintelligent.
Final Rating: I would have liked to rate it higher for the art (the outfits are crisp
He inserts himself where he is not wanted, does not respect the decisions she makes, and is actively trying to sabotage a relationship with a man that, as far as he is aware is, she wants
His ass reeks of delusion and he needs to wake up Bluepiano
Arent we all delusional lol also hes pretty smart so he knows something fishy is definitely going on with their narriage. Had he beenn100% sure that their marriage was based on love and authencity he wouldve definitely been more pushy. An ass he is tho
Did I like the ending of the main story? Absolutely not. I thought we were gearing up for more plot . Did I cackle like a witch after that final smack? I absolutely did 10/10
Reached chapter 70 and cannot continue.
The art is great! Except for inconsistent lighting at ballroom scenes where it's supposed to be night outside but from the inside of the ballroom the windows look bright as day (but this is a very niche complaint and I don't see it bothering other people.)
The story was not exciting. Anything that could have been a challenge (having to find the memories by herself, figuring out the exact nature of her relationship with her maternal family, starting to gain assets for her independence in a meaningful way) was stripped from the very beginning so she didn't have to do anything that would stray from collecting "her beauties", which resulted in her doing absolutely nothing of substance. The ML's fell fast and with little build up. If the romance was going to be the thing that carried the story, it flopped. One of the things that bothered me the most was her cluelessness to how her "terminal illness" was affecting other people emotionally. It is understandable for her to be more chill about it since she knows she is not going to die, but to see other people in distress over it and just go " I don't get why they're sad," made her look dumb and emotionally unintelligent.
Final Rating:
I would have liked to rate it higher for the art (the outfits are crisp