beta
The story somewhat fine in the beginning, but it keep getting messup as the story process, and not a good kind of messup either. It like the author put too much OP character in later that he not sure what to do with it, and since in 53 chapter only, it get rush sooooo badly cause there no time to deal with all the thing he cook up. I have no idea what i was reading at the later chapter at all. Regret wasting my time read it (╬￣皿￣)凸
the author better not throw a "Family realize they owned everything they have thank to ML support and now they rerget and sorry and they want him back and the ML deciced to forgave them and go back to be family" cliched in the future. Thought the pace are kinda slow.