The story somewhat fine in the beginning, but it keep getting messup as the story process, and not a good kind of messup either. It like the author put too much OP character in later that he not sure what to do with it, and since in 53 chapter only, it get rush sooooo badly cause there no time to deal with all the thing he cook up. I have no idea what i was reading at the later chapter at all. Regret wasting my time read it (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸
not sure what the author trying here, but the overly naive, nice, stupid, don't listen to what people say even through they are trying to be sneaky to avoid danger FL just don't click it, the live in the tower her whole life just don't justify that stupidness to me cause she already gone through severeal danger situation already doesn't it? Does she just forget it or what ?
Or is the author trying to make her a real Fairy tale type FL ( The alway need a knight in shining amor to rescue her cause she just THAT nice, naive, kind, dumd ) type.
Yeeees agree wholeheartedly ohmaigawd!
Why they doing our girl dirty like that
I'm so annoyed reading this chapter, they made them loud and obnoxious for no reason. This girl survived seeing people's legs got chopped off, bf turning to some eldritch creature, and they expect us to believe she'd scream at the sight of a woman trapped inside human-sized cocoon. I'm?????? There's a huge line between kind and stupid, and her character's gearing towards the later.




the author better not throw a "Family realize they owned everything they have thank to ML support and now they rerget and sorry and they want him back and the ML deciced to forgave them and go back to be family" cliched in the future. Thought the pace are kinda slow.