Fart

this is so fucking bad these comments are frying me how is anyone tolerating this - its all slop. the flanderisation of the sub is insane to me, he was a very strong character at the beginning, physically and emotionally. wtf is this like "googoogaga baby" type shit hes going through. even through the art style, its insane. same thing with the top, i understand changing as you develop through a relationship but like the thing at the graveyard with "introducing" yourself to the grave was on some dumb shit. its all so exaggerated and the art style went down the drain asw. on top of that the sex scenes arent even good

i actually cant get over how bad of a story this was, like nothing about it was good. The sex scenes were sub par, the character development didn't make sense for either character. I understand they were/are both traumatised but parts really did not make sense for who they were established to be at the beginning. Ending was so rushed and not fleshed out fully. Like this was exceptionally bad. darn, i spent my entire night on this