i actually cant get over how bad of a story this was, like nothing about it was good. The sex scenes were sub par, the character development didn't make sense for either character. I understand they were/are both traumatised but parts really did not make sense for who they were established to be at the beginning. Ending was so rushed and not fleshed out fully. Like this was exceptionally bad. darn, i spent my entire night on this
genuinely cannot stand how infantilised dobin has become, i lowk cant read this anymore because of it
Right he was so much better in s1
am i going crazy why is no one noticing how the dialogue is chat gpt, like its distracting me how glaringly ai this is
Bruh what
Girl???
there’s no way that ai can give the lack of consent a korean author does
LMAOOO why is this so funny
no im saying i think its the english translation, theyre using ai
"how could i ever forget someone like you? cute, weird, impossible to ignore"
lowk agree, it seemed off to me at some points too
Doesn’t seem anymore cringe or booktok than any other story lmao ai is a stretch
oh my god actually peak holy shit wow. wow cant get over it, cried like three times
this might be the worst thing ive ever read
for real the yellow hair guy just keeps getting sexually assaulted even by the black hair guy
ts is genuinely so buns omg. like its so inconsistent. other than the terrible writing where nothing is left up to interpretation, the characters are so inconsistent. I understand that yujin was gonna leave but when has he ever been submissive enough to let the other guy carry him around and treat him like a baby. smh, theyre rlly hot tho
I gas tf out of this story because by the time I’m done doing lab work my brain is fried and if I take anything by too seriously I might just explode. But reading on a sober mind feels exactly like this, thank you twin.
jesus christ not only was that a shit story but the ending was so rushed
this is so fucking bad these comments are frying me how is anyone tolerating this - its all slop. the flanderisation of the sub is insane to me, he was a very strong character at the beginning, physically and emotionally. wtf is this like "googoogaga baby" type shit hes going through. even through the art style, its insane. same thing with the top, i understand changing as you develop through a relationship but like the thing at the graveyard with "introducing" yourself to the grave was on some dumb shit. its all so exaggerated and the art style went down the drain asw. on top of that the sex scenes arent even good
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