MC is consistently chaotic and I like it. I wasn’t sure I’d like him for very long because this type of character often turns into an annoying, cocky/somewhat mean type. But MC is very playful, the baby of his family, and stays that way. It’s not for everyone, but he works hard and I find him funny.
I feel like this story hit its peak during the first arc. The fight to reclaim her title was engaging. Now it’s just Elrose and Rakshan dealing with cliche misunderstandings and random conflict that comes out of nowhere. I’d like more exploration of their actual characters if it’s going to be a love story. Otherwise, the conflict needs higher stakes and more world building. It’s dragging. Going to drop. Maybe I’ll check back in when it’s done out of curiosity.











You know what. I’m rooting for the false saint. MC is obviously a masochist and likes being tormented. Why ruin her good time? False saint for queen!