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IDK....I don't like the transition of the seme from being creepy to straight up psychotic. Nor the uke just being weak through and through, like instead of becoming stronger, he became weaker. I can't express it well, my poor english, lol. I've read rap*-y stuff before and I am not dazed by it whatsoever, as long as the story is written well, but this one, imo, is poorly done. Maybe it's just me. I'm hope the story gets better, not just the plot but the execution as well because the art is good.