bro she’s being so fucking stubborn. i was liking this till now. ur telling me u suddenly cant trust the person that has been protecting u the most… and knowing her “family” are that kind of ppl shouldn’t she be more conscious of new people suddenly showing up tryna be close to her….
correct me if i’m wrong but i swear he was in the last chapter so i thought he would show up abit for this one LOL
okay i few points i find that kinda irks me even tho the story is kinda interesting
1. i get that she’s the mc and she’s starting to change the dynamics of the family but like as a reader this is feels like she’s a character with a lot of plot armour. like i don’t think it would’ve been bad to make her lose any of the “duels” bc i honestly think it could’ve added to the story
2. the cover of the story made it seem like her dad would be more relevant but most of the story especially at the start really revolves around her relationship with her grandfather. which don’t get me wrong that makes sense but like at the start the only time we really see her dad is when he brought her in. more over the start felt so rushed like tell me more about the dead son. show me more of their relationship building.
i think the story itself is like okay… like don’t get me wrong i’ve read a lot of story’s where the mc is like invincible or whatever and furthermore she’s just a kid but it js feels like there’s plot holes and the more i read the more like stupid it feels.
bro shit is getting real really quick and i’m scared for the drama bc everything rn is going considerably chill T^T
i remember when this first came out i really liked the dynamic of the mc and the top but like when he just seemed to be so much more of a dickhead compared to woori in the middle part of the story i wavered A LOT.
it’s not that i expected woori and the mc to end up together but i really liked their dynamic more in the later parts of the story. and especially since this hasn’t been updated in SO long i sat in that opinion for a really long time so i feel like these recent chapters don’t feels as satisfying now that the mc and top are back together. I think it’s mainly bc in the end it felt like we only saw the mc reaching out for the relationship and the top wasnt decisive till the very end. Also dont get me wrong ik this happens a lot in other stories and i always come around to it but for some reason in this i just dont fully feel satisfied, like maybe there is wasn’t enough yearning. in the end this is js my opinion and i definitely don’t hate the story im just kinda disappointed
ok don’t get me wrong the ai cover is definitely a shit show but honestly the story itself isn’t bad imo. for me at least i’m waiting for more updates. if u go into this with expectations kinda low then it will surprise u a bit LMFAO. but yeah i think it’s interesting enough me to wait for more
i get her urgency but like this FL is just so naive… like girl i thought we weren’t trusting that red haired girl anymore. i really thought she was gonna fool us here and have some sort of comeback. i also don’t understand why she couldn’t have js went with the ML… like did she think she could fight for herself??? it’s almost like not a single thought went into her plan
bro this was cinematic. so beautiful. this is what we needed to see. now chase dan till ur legs can’t run anymore
