this could've been so good without it
It's an omegaverse??????? Was I so distracted by the hotness of ml that I didn't notice lmfao
WAIT WHAT?! I DIDNT EVEN REALISE
im just automatically against the fact tbh, im sure ill read it still
Aha yeah I recently caught up with the raws after the reading the first chapter and I’d say it’s actually pretty decadent
Decent*
holy shit it just keeps getting dragged out, get it over with
ah seriously this manga always ends at the worst times, especially cause the updates are so slow
I just need some closure with this ending, did they die or not???? bruh I just gotta know, this ending is too cruel
They did sadly since the black cloud stuff closed up the whole area they where in
the person who drew over the dicks ruined it
I did find them a bit hard to ignore lol (pun intended)
They’ve clearly never seen a dick before lmaooo how they think they gonna redraw what they don’t know. I’d rather have it uncensored
there's so many flaws with this manga, I wish we'd gotten a little more In depth with the characters in the beginning, like what schools like and their social life as well as how blonde guy and black hair guy came to know each other. the author rushes that but makes extremely long and boring sex scenes, black haired guy keeps repeating himself as well as blondie, it gets repetitive as hell. good art tho ill give em that.
Wot? So someone like blondie repetitively trying to force themselves on someone does not warrant the opposite kind of repetitive response? Wow. Also it's really annoying when people like you aren't satisfied with any kind of storytelling at all but can't deign to show us how 'excellent' your skills are in that area. I mean you people are complaining when the flashbacks happen too quickly or when they happen too slow so when someone tries to compromise you would think you would finally be happy. But nope, gotta complain about that as well. Entitled much?
why are you randomly bashing a person who just commented on technical parts? It is ok to expect some refined work and every artist gets criticized. That's how they produce better work. Different opinions.
thank you for understanding what I meant
I just said things that might've made the story better, the things I mentioned are usually what makes mangas popular, also what (and I cannot stress this enough) thee fuck does being entitled have to do with this? I work with comics daily as its my job of 5 years, im also a typewriter on here so ive read my fair share of stories so I know what makes a typically good manga and what doesn't. unlike you I cae with constructive criticism
This story is so messy and overall just bad, there’s no story line it’s just something dogs happening all the time
Different*
if you don't know the language don't try to translate Jesus Christ