beta
You can tell so much went into this story by the small details they added, character design and story planning but the execution was terrible and didn't flow. The art was good and the story was simple but entertaining in the beginning its a shame it ended this way.
Hopefully the artist picks up another story bc I do like their art and also that the author organizes their thoughts bc they have potential.
Overall I give it a (use as fire wood/10)
Okay, I thought I was crazy. But you said it perfectly. There was so much potential and I think what happened is that the writer came back because people wanted them too, not because they were ready. The first half was amazing enough to pull me in and look for this story all through that long hiatus, but something felt so chaotic (?) in the second half that I started dreading new chapters, but had to finish because that’s just who I am.
100% for a moment I even thought another author picked it up, and same I can never drop something I started
Lol both ml and T told him "dont compete where you can't compare"