Just finished reading this so apologies if this has been answered before
When Edwin goes to battle, where does that fit in the timeline? The way it was presented it looked like it was after Leira he was a snake but clearly not because it later jumps back to the discovery. Pretty sure its not before they had intercourse cause of what Edwin tells him right when leaving, but did that much time really pass from when they first had intercoirse to the discovery of his snake form enough to have Edwin go to battle. Idk I just find that scene really out of place lol im overthinking it.
Author really shot themselves in the foot with that whole rape scene. I'm still reading because they are genuinely so cute but every time I'm reminded about jaeyi and it just ruins the mood. Like it seemed so out of bles that he reacted like that. Why couldn't the author just make him yell or ghost mooyoung. If moyoung was just going yo forgive so easily couldn't it been something that isn't a a crime. Sigh now even if they act all cuddly and cute, doesn't matter cause all readers are reminded of that scene, just so unnecessary
1. The incest: ok its understanble why are ppl thrown of bc they are cousins but you need some context as to why this story was created. There is a meme in in mexico were people from Monterrey marry their cousins. It's as if someone from the US made a bl comic of two cousins from Alabama. I read the story on the official cite and it is really good. It is so easy to get rid of the cousin aspect and just say it's a family friend but its understandable why ppl are thrown off
2. The art: the artist made the first chapter on her PHONE PEOPLE !!! the amount. Of skill the takes is insane of course it's a little wonky but once again all they are using is their fingers. This leads to my next point
3. Support author: this is a small artist/author. They aren't backed up by any comic cite like lez or taps, they upload their work for free (just search up the name it's easy to find). Not sure how this person is translating this but I'm assuming its through google translate (ocrrext me if I'm wrong) the artist stated that they do not want any other lang translations without asking and on her page it says that eng has not yet been translated. If you're going to translate pls ask them first.
Just to clarify some things, it's not common to kiss a stranger in America whether on the cheek or the lips however during big festivities like parades, raves, festivals , and this case New Years, there is this practice were singles will make out. This is especially true during New Years in New York, so the context isn't entirely wrong but it's also not true
Yeah I feel bad for guy having to see his crush get fucke by his friend but its whatever. They haven't know each other for long nor have they discussed their feelings. The bottom hasn't done anything wrong, plus the top was already informed of his habits of being a playboy and the bottom seems to have traumatic experience regarding relationships. This is barely the start of the story we still call ways to go so while I feel bad for the seme, I dont dislike the uke











Im rooting for Yaachan x Toono, but if they don't get together, all I can hope is yaachan gets with someone other than Tamura. I don't really see the chemistry but author seems to have them as an alternate in case yaachan and toono don't get together