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This was so cute!
The art is great, the storyline is nice.
At first I was wondering if the ML was in his 30s already coz they made him look old compared to his friends and clubmates but he was like 24-25 so I was confused as to why they made it seem so illegal in the first place. But FL was almost an adult so it wasn’t even that bad of an age gap lol, to call him mister was really funny. The Second ML tho sometimes I wish they ended up together but at the same time I would feel so bad for ML. ML is a literal walking green flag. Did you all see how well he took care of FL when she got her period?! Like at first they made it seem like he dated left and right but he just never said no, and judging by the way he treats FL, looks like he was a good partner in his previous relationships. I honestly just wish they stop making it look like he is WAAAYYYY older than her like guys its not like they're over 10 years apart. Anyway, FL was adorable, ML was such a good guy, and poor second ML but keep up the good work, you’ll find love someday. Also I don’t wanna see no comments about this being related to grooming coz that’s definitely not what ML did. He didn’t even think they’d meet again. He always stopped her advances and even told her she has better options and whatnot so don’t.
Is there smut or is it a story with none?
None, its more of a plot and character focus story
Thank you (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Where is the part where he explains to yoojoon what he went through? Where is the part where yoojoon understands what happened to jiho? Man, I get that you feel like yoojoon is too good for you and yes he is, but if you just explained to him like how you explained to your toxic ex, then he would’ve understood and tried to help you. Also, toxic ex got what he deserved without yoojoon having to dirty his hands, but like is it just me or is the ending a bit rushed. Lowkey wanted to know if jiho ended up explaining what happened to him. I wanted to know what happened to the ex, i also wanted to know how much time passed when they met again. Like idk, the art was nice, the plot was interesting and a bit frustrating, but the end was definitely not enough.