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This is so well written, from the plot and every character’s story—It’s so well written. Everyone had their own reasons for acting that way, each and every character made development by accepting their feelings. This story makes you understand so much in human life.
Each character had their own flaws, but they were perfect just the way they are. Even father, omg when I saw his backstory, there was one word that appeared in my mind. He was a coward, that’s what he is. Despite being the ruthless and immortal man he is, he’s a coward, but his character was so complex along with Rose. I didn’t want to admit it but I was so intrigued by their father-daughter relationship.
I don’t really have any comment other than I love Leo, Grimm, Yunsu, and Chae-ah so bad—Them four are so well written (like all others but they stood out the most)
Not to mention the enemies to lovers, it’s so perfect. They maintained their dynamic even after liking eachother, that’s the best thing when it comes to enemies to lovers! They didn’t become all that lovey dovey making all their interactions even more intimate.
This started so good, but I feel like it’s getting dragged on for too long. I mean, I like reading angst but they should really communicate. Both of them are so dumb it’s pissing me off
In my opinion, atp I think that Mc is being selfish, despite thinking for both of them