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I feel like if they covered his(seme) backstory more, why he functioned the way he did, I would've liked this story more. Trauma doesn't justify shitty behavior but it can make you understand a little why they did it(still doesn't make it ok, alr?) but this was so quickly finished that I couldn't even be attached to them. Plus I thought it was funny how the uke said their revenge game ended when it was cleared up that the seme didn't come to him for revenge, and the hate-love thing wasn't covered well enough that it honestly just looks like they had a quarrel back in HS and made it their whole personality. If that makes sense?