It somehow feels both slow as hell and lacking of stakes while also just missing any sort of urgency. As someone who is a self-proclaimed connoisseur of trash, this story doesn't fall in the direct trash pile, but it also just isn't outstanding enough to be seen as Mid. This story isn't offensive in any way, i just feel like the author could like, ramp it up a bit. Perhaps a lot.
Despite nothing ever happening, I still come back like an sad, hungry, abused dog.
Will see you again in 5-6 months where I'll probably reread everything and get blinded by the ghost of blowjob's past