I get why some readers felt like the ending wasn’t that good (idk how to word it), but FOR ME it actually ended just right. I’ve been reading the official releases up to current uploads, though the scanlations kinda confused me . Anyw, I cried when he proposed on the staircase. I love them so much as a couple and I’m really happy it ended well for them, especially with the mother-in-law. I hope I find someone who’ll stand up for me and love me like that too
Yeah I liked this one but only read the unofficials, so some parts were confusing. I think I’ll reread when the officials are all out and like it better.
I stopped at Chapter 88 to let updates pile up & catch my breath, but here we go—I got spoiled, ok but that really got my attention back here. Anyw, he keeps suffering fr our Dan can’t catch a break.
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I thought the cover was gonna be a toxic smut romance, but then we got a green flag ML… and he dies?? I was literally like ‘ay potangina??’ at the end This should honestly be tagged as a tragedy. Overall this is peak BUT IT HURTS… tf I should’ve just gone to sleep, it’s 2am bro.
Wth I know it’s a short story but they should’ve made it 5-10 chapters not just 2 (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ I need more of this, the plot is peak and the leads are hot af. Any recs like this? Maybe even a novel if there’s nothing similar hahah
I got spoiled about the ending from a post, so maybe that also affected my expectations. But now that I’ve read up to Chap 65 here, the tension keeps building every chap, and knowing Chap 6* is already the end makes me feel like the pacing might be rushed. I wasn’t expecting any romance since it fits the genre, and the ending isn’t bad or anything… but after all that buildup, I just feel like they could’ve done more or made it hit harder.
Maybe this is just me, but I hope you read this and let me know your thoughts, guys, SINCE WE ALL HAVE DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVES too. ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
No i completely agree with u i also got spoiled and my first thought was “that’s it..?” Like u were saying about the tension they had and for what? It just seems wasteful to end it this early. I was expecting at least 30 more chapters if not 40 I feel there was a lot to expand especially with the whole caterpillar and grasshopper metaphor. If it was me writing it I would have went for the route of him being indecisive of what he rlly wanted to do with her since this is the first time he’s been obsessed with an actual breathing human being. I would assume he would be a little confused/conflicted because he normal TAKES lives and then for the fl side her actions against him should have been calculated but slow like she’s plotting to him him the entire time then at some point nearing the end she successfully ends his life but only because he let her. If he was gonna “lose” or go out in anyway why not go by the hands of somebody he “loved” He had nothing to go back to anyway he’s wanted he’d rather die by the hands of her then go to prison. That’s my take or how I feel it should have went.
The special chapters are so cute omg They literally gave me happy tears for Isaac and Mel. They are such a green-flag couple, and their baby Royce is so cute. I need more of them, especially their future. Please, I want to see Carrot more grow up. This is so peak, omfg, I want to cry.
They look like vampires, tbh and they even have fangs. We definitely need more lore about their childhood and the whole experiment situation because it wasn’t explained well. Also, 30 chapters feels too short. ╥﹏╥
he seriously needs a vasectomy after come out of 3rd baby....