beta
It had such an interesting premise and could’ve been great, but I feel like the story wasn’t executed properly. Maybe because it was too short. Hopefully the author revisits this one day and turns it into a full series. It has so much potential.
The premise is interesting but the whole thing has 0 depth. It’s so shallow and it’s like the story’s just getting narated like “this happened, and then this happened, and then this also happened”
AHHH YES THISSSS
The pacing feels so off and with no real story ups and downs. its odd it feels so predictable and bland