beta
This is dry as my mom's fried chicken. Don't get me wrong, I honestly saw potential since I really liked the jewel concept. And the Fl and Ml are really likeable but there's something about this story that bores the hell out of me. I think the way the story flows just really irks me (Idk I'm a VERY unsure person after all). It progresses annoyingly sloooow. To each their own though. Give it a go :>