it's as if they both cannot be a thing unless rape and assault is involved....
Every time this gets an update I'm spiraling all over again.
This BL also has the most comments I have ever given a work, maybe bc I expected greater writing... since it had somehow some potential.
Especially the chapters were YO was trying to get over him and then also rejected JH's very late confession, those few chapters and how YO expressed his feelings was PEAK, it was so good, it moved me. Only for the author to rush the ending and make this ridiculous conclusion... They legit made a beautiful flower, after giving us dogshit for over 60 chapters, only to stomp on the flower and smush it it into the dirty ground. And then she hit us with the historical sides that were also dogshit and rape all over again, who needed that fr????
Then gave us the sides of their relationship, they had the chance here to communicate, and also let us see how their dynamic works, BUT NO, let's give them a conflict and that being: SEX
Like, intimacy and sex is ofc a part in a romantic relationship, but not the core of it.
I hoped for better writing and we got dogshit AGAIN. The part were they went to the beach house was nice but not enough and lacked in so many ways.
And now we got two extra chapters with YO getting raped and assaulted...AGAIN... and JH being insufferable like always.
I'm so disappointed....
EXACTLY, it's crazy cus I kinda thought the dragon side stories were good, but bro I just got fucking stockholm cus THOSE WERE RAPE SCENES TOO (coercion ≠ consent, Yeon-ho was under the impression that if he did not have sex with him, his people would die of famine), it crazy when that is the most healthy dynamic between them tho
as if an apology would make the assault go away... huh!!?? these two extra sides were so unnecessary and ridiculous.... Why not write smth short and cute, about their already established relationship???? Why make it rape all over again.
IM SO GLAD this didn't turn into rape or a toxic mess.
He has just gotten obsessive ahahahah this is going into a very juicy direction.
He also communicated right away that it is his brother and then at the end gave him a soft kiss bc ig he was angry at the start and didn't wanna give but he sees him as his lover (doesn't fully know yet) so he had to give a kiss. He probably also felt a bit upset w himself acting this way.
I'm glad he didn't put much anger onto MC.
Hope this stays fluffy, cute and gives us much yearning!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haikyuu ran so this can walk!
it's so good, funny, I like the pacing and how it touches on unhealthy family structures and toxicity.
I hope the mother divorced the father bc WTF, this can cause so much harm if left like this....
The characters are fun and I can't wait to dive into each individually, would love to know about the coach too. It for sure has massive potential and I hope it will keep on going strong.
The art is also so pretty and fierce and then goofy. It is a beautiful blend of it all.
Ah .. It's f back w more sexual assault and rape....
Literally #－.－) cant she do an regular "foul mouthed guy"? like yelling and stuff?? why is it always SA????
legit must be her kink, bc otherwise ... Idk.
old au side stories even had rape... what a waste of good art and anatomy.
THE END ?????
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This can go in sooooo many directions.
A: he loses interest in the whole sex buddy thing
B: he starts releasing his frustrating and anger onto him
C: they break off this arrangement
D: he uses him, to give back the pain his brother caused
E: they just continue but he gets rougher and less sweet
F: the sun explodes
I choose B, D and E
Oh, oh my! U like it toxic I c isbsidneken
Please let it be F
I'm so w u
Cause that's how it always goes
I lost faith
Hahaha yeah... Let's hope that it doesn't but based on that reaction and face from the ML... Yeah.... This ain't looking good
Oh to have sb be so affectionate and in love with you like GO YU-WON AND HYEONA!!!!! AJSBSKDNDJDN
I love all the couples here, the yuri and the yaoi !! This is just peak slice of life + smut
I just love the part when he got shot on his thigh but didn't get any treatment or it just not even being mentioned whatsoever
Yah I have a feeling that the author forgot it even happened ngl
I feel like author forgot a lot of things ...ahha
Whole story felt like that horse meme. Strong start but then slowly keeps getting worse in quality and story. Also so rushed....and anticlimactic :C
PTFFF SO REAL, it really does, I read it the whole thing last night and like after that sleepwalk test with the doctor, whole thing felt rushed. Like idek how but the next chapter of that was a MMA match with the Seme and that old dude, like wtf I was wondering halfway why it was only 9.1 even tho they’re both well written characters… but ig it’s cuz of the story progression
the way the brother views MC in his thoughts is creppy.. Wdym u imagine him naked and viewing him in such a way for u to toy with ??????? U saw his butt.. AND? MOVE THE FUVK ON!!!
I 100% wouldn't wanna be friends w sb who saw my butt, especially in such a state, especially w those remarks and comments they add after.. Just no!