Am I hallucinating?
Where did that skill come from? The awakening??
Was there some build up I missed? I know my memory is shit but did I just forget something?? Are they on some deadline to end this story in 2 chapters or smth?????
That "death" was so... (,, • ࡇ • ,,)
I don't even feel sad, just...weirded out. The pacing here is so bad, like seriously zero build up - it (the build up) could have happened in THIS fight, but give us something!
Internal dialogue, some flashback, more emotion from BOTH of them- SOMETHING that doesn't make this "death" feel so cheap ( ,,⩌'︿'⩌,,)