beta
A little over halfway through, and shit how did Mac’s personality change so much, getting twinkified every chapter and ugh I don’t know I don’t like it. So far it’s been a pattern amongst too many authors
So far I’ve read 20 chapters and like half of the time it felt like the plot was a little all over the place, I had go back read over some chapters bc I kept missing the damn plot. Especially in the beginning. I’m glad I’m not the only one. But it does seem like a good story. I’m all for fluffy, minimal drama, slice of life stories. And all these art student plots nowadays makes me so happy ╮(￣▽￣)╭