I marinated this for so long, and i will wait again, ping me back alive when there's 20 new chapters LOL
I'm not one to leave a critic on things because I don't know much, but as a writer that never finished any of her books—I say I'm disappointed.
For a story to introduce characters left and right, we didn't get a story for Michael, didn't see Leticia's father try harder, didn't see that adopted sister, and what Empress, we didn't see them talk.
As well as the fact that there's just too much happening, what do you mean her mother may be the dragon, or something that relates both, and what about Iblis or whatever, the fact that they added the detail about all the higher demons following a certain someone written in the prophecy. This is a lot of things stacked together into a mess.
And why did her personality change so much? Sure, a person grows vulnerable with someone they trust, but isn't that sudden? My frustration reached the roof with that. Oh I saved you, you'll save me, next moment I'm in love—okay fuck off lmao
Anyway, this is just a rant, AND THAT BABY DRAGON AND THE FACT THAT IT'S A CRADLE NOT A TOMB? WTF IS THAT SWITCH UP? WHERE DID THAT BABY DRAGON COME FROM???
Quentin—Q, looks hot tho.. like.. no lie in here, just a very.. veeerrrryyy curious mind.
I like the Whale King.. I think a little too much...
I totally get it! That me with Ron
I'M GLAD YOU'RE ON THE SAME BOAT. That man is soooo fine (Ron as well) and Cale's dad has something about him that makes him attractive too!
The tigers shaman too
And that Uncle Flynn guy,
the way i felt my breath get stuck in my throat—what kinda—OH MY SHIT I LIKE IT THO
is it done is it done, i wanna read it in one go
not yet i think
you strong soul, keep fighting
Nope, wait like 5 months and it MAYBE to the end. If you compare it to the book, each the comic does like 4 paragraphs of the book for each of their chapters.
I'LL KEEP IT SIMMERING THEN, I'LL HOLD BACK
I will, I WILL
I wanna ride Ryder and use Jair like a chair.