I mean... We tried to cook but we burned water in the bottom of the pan. I could turn off my brain for a second and read, and I did. Story is a typical BL, there was character development, learning and growing but I feel like the redemption just wasn't enough for what he did. Granted, in the situation all that matters is what the other party wants to do.
Was there an international struggle with Asil? Yep. He didn't just brush everything under a rug and be like "well the sex is good so I'll forgive him". He really had to struggle within himself to be able to let go of hatred and begin to love the ML, however... I feel like there should've been more. Asil should have had a support system so things wouldn't seem like the ML was all he had. Granted, that was true. His family basically abandoned him to pursue their own happiness, and there's nothing wrong with that, sometimes that's just how it is.
But goddammit if Vallery (?) doesn't get on his knees and beg for forgiveness every single day, I don't want it. He did what he did true to his character, and I like that, both characters seemed like real people. The soft moments that made Asil question Vallery's (?) humanity were really real to me. I guess all and all, it was pretty rushed. I knew the moment Asil got poisoned what Vallery (?) was gonna do from them on out. Within my expectations, 7/10
Omg I'm in love they're driving me insane, I need more! I'll be looking for this every day; like I haven't been so sucked into something in a long time!
I'm either terrified or elated to see you! Definitely prefer the side story to the main story, Ricky is traumatizing me in a different way, and I'll just survive
I haven't read a lot of stories where the OG person comes back and is actually pissed off at the host of their body for doing exactly what the OG wanted to accomplish, but here we are. I love my baby silver spoon , he's gonna learn. Or he's gonna get deleted, who really knows.
This is dumb. I love it. Give me more.
This does make me laugh fr. I can just turn off my brain and giggle.
I don't mind stories like this. I just see this as someone's fetish/kink that they wrote out. Disturbing stuff doesn't bother me too much anymore, at least, when it's fictional. I think that is saving me a lot of mental gymnastics these days.
Only problem I have is that I don't like the daughter/niece. She's kind of annoying to me. She's really childish, and it could stem from her trauma, but at this point she's supposably 20, acting like a horny teenager. Girl, stop I'm not saying she should be peak maturity, but she could definitely gain some sense at this point. Bring back the brown haired girl.
For once, can I get a nice rainbow colored ml don't get me wrong, I love them all, they're hot, but blond hair and blue eyes, black hair & black/blue/red eyes? Even silver hair is over used. We running out of colors gimme a redhead. Gimme a grassy haired menace, or a pink haired playboy idk.
If y'all got recommendations, lmk. Genuinely love this story so far, but ya know how it is. Tired of the same thing sometimes.
Communication! Thank the heavens and hells I can't even describe how beautiful this was . My heart it melting!
There is something for everyone. Some people have this kind of fetish, and I am not here to shame anyone for what they're into-
But can we please just have some form of... I don't know.... Consent? Is... Is that too much to ask? Like, this is a recognized fetish, I know people who are very much into this kind of thing... like, this has potential, if it started out with them having like, a secret conversation agreement to this. Kinda like BDSM.
Don't get me wrong, I'mma read this, cause it's fiction and people are definitely taking this waaaay too close to heart. Like, if you're whole argument is "if this happened irl", then it's invalid. Because it's just a story.
Not being able to distinguish reality and fiction is an entirely separate issue. No sane person is going to read this, and thing the stuff happening in this story is okay, because that's just not realistic.
Emphasis on "sane" because there is always that margin of degenerates that are going to read this fictional story and take it as reality.
I'm not going to argue, I see this both ways, and I see the one way to actually fix a story like this; establish implied consent in some way, easy. Though, this isn't going to happen, it's more like a lesson to people writing stories like these because they have a fetish. Having this kind of fetish doesn't make anyone explicitly evil or anything, imo.
I need this kind of weird goofy content after some of the drama I've read. It's funny in a dumb way and I'm so here for that.
It took me forever to work up the nerve to actually read this whole thing, because it hits a little too close.
I don't speak on artwork, I can't draw. 10/10
Feels. 10/10
My sympathy for the characters. 11/10
Not only can I see everyone's perspective, I completely understand and empathize each and every one of them. Beautiful written imo.
He so fruity it's giving tropical. Love the sass, be jealous boo . Get your mans, help him work through his issues.
The twist made me feel so much better, and also so much worse. 9/10 would read again.
Bro, easy 9/10. I love it so much, I'm over here fucking squealing and being jealous even though if I had to go through what they did, I'd legit lose my shit.
