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It's pretty okay, but the amount of unresolved conflicts is driving me nuts. Shekina comes in, causes a scene in the manor, SEVERAL people get fired for causing a further scene, and then.... No consequences. No follow up. Forget that part happened, we're never gonna mention it again. It's very, very sloppy writing.
bro youre the FORMER duke throwing your weight around like anyone cares byeee