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This... This was bad. I'm not trying to be mean but the story was everywhere, the pacing felt rushed, they would add in characters and events with those characters then never mention them again, the female lead felt so flat and all together the story had no structure. I was interested when they explained how people became mages I thought it would get angsty and deep but instead all these people that supposedly hate people just fall head over heels for the FL I mean come on they let they're guards down completely and that just pissed me off. Not to mention the FL sudden personality change how does she go from traumatised girl to confidence through the roof over night, in any normal situation she would have had some left over anxiety but NO, it didn't make her more interesting it just made her feel like a Marry Sue OC.
I had really high hopes for this manhwa and it was a total let down, I kept reading hoping it would get better but it just got worse.
Idk maybe it's just me that thinks this and some people out there really liked it but this was just lazy.
Hey shit I'm sobbing. I knew this would happen but omfg does it still hurts .. I think I'm gonna go lye down and cry for a bit.（/TДT)/