Keitorima's Topics (15)

Sauce for that last photo?

Honestly, for a webtoon that has a main focus on authors it’s pretty bad with plot development. When I started reading this, yes I was expecting a mess with relationships. It’s just a form of dramatic tension, and what story is fun without it? When you start with something, normal story progression is expected. For example, at least make Doona finish the ONE class (semester really) she was signed up for. Then start on a new arc. I understand that this is essentially porn/author’s fantasies. But at this point Doona doesn’t even have a consistent character ie she doesn’t even have basic core values set. She goes “I want to be aware of my partners and how they feel” to straight up “I can’t give more than a rat’s ass about you.” Honestly, it’s amazing that Minho and Doona even survived in Korea. The whole culture is very collectivist, so seeing Minho and Doona survive past college without any maturity is amazing.
Overall, I see it very difficult to really have a resolution to this story. Was the porn nice? Yeah. Will I keep reading? No. I like plot filled porn, so pass. Just like S Flower for me.

Sigh. Just sigh. This is like the prime example of how important communication is in any relationship. I’m just amazed that the characters managed to make through 8 years without learning the importance of communication. I hope readers who read this will learn from these mistakes. Like not just romantic relationships but any relationship. (Work, friends, family)

If the killings have several victims for the past 4 months, and all of the victims have the same descriptions in the same exact area, there’s no way that there could be many more people matching that description... that being with the assumption that this is set in an Eurocentric area, meaning that black hair is rarer... So couldn’t the task force find the to be victims and observe if anything is slightly suspicious...? Just my observations（◞‿◟）ʃ

Good if you want porn. Not my cup of tea with the ridiculous pacing and plot based.

The overall flow and details were great hahaha. Wasn’t expecting a lot, and it really delivered. Would recommend for the storytelling and pacing!

I think the author tried to introduce too many elements at once. You have Murim, Reincarnation, “Unique”, and gates all mashed into one. If the author focused on a few elements and then begin introducing more elements the overall story flow would be better. Since the story is every where, there’s really no place for character development and it just becomes a story of stupid fighting. It’s also really hard when you have an extremely OP character that can flick his hand and kill everyone.

I think the story is very creative but pacing and character development is lacking. Still enjoyed it for now, but might be difficult to say if it continues like this.

Ngl I was so focused on the feelz I forgot about Lucas until the most recent chapter

So like... I felt like I got ricked rolled... I genuinely thought it would be a story that would revolve around a dragon... and then... I got an omegaverse... I don’t know how I feel...

Did anyone else see that hint that Ogata might have been Saya's senpai in high school? (///>~<) You know when Saya was able to read Ogata's expressions cuz he's been watching Ogata for years??? Someone give me some support~~~!!! <3 (7>~<)7