idk how to say it but this manhwa lowk pmo. it started off good, i liked it. but as the story goes on, i feel like i dont even know the personality of the mc. its like hes bipolar yk. smtimes hes so apprehensive abt being w the ml and then the next hes enthusiastic abt it. idk man, am i the only one feeling this. he acts so uncharacteristically sometimes that idek what character traits he embodies. dykwim? TT.
and sorry cuz i might be picky abt this but, the ml is lowk so manipulative? like, every other sentence hes like manipulating the mc to do smt he wants. im talking abt the 20 year old ml. ml wants mc to do smt and mc says he doesnt want to, then ml goes acting all pitiful and basically guilt trips mc into doing what he wants. i get this is common in korean manhwas but i feel like im seeing it a lot more in this one and its starting to feel overwhelming. usually idrc abt this but its kinda too obv to ignore in this one.
then comes the part of mc crying over nothing?? girl, he literally only js took off his watch for a few hours, even if he enters code red or wtv, hes def gna have some other guide guide him right? why are we crying over smt as trivial as that. and not to mention, hes doing training? they wldnt let him go berserk in a supervised environment... there was literally no reason to cry abt it. at most maybe feel a lil bit of worry, but its not to the pt of needing to bawl ur eyes out when he came home. perhaps i remembered what happened wrong, but im sure mc had no good reason to cry there.
omg the more i think abt this manhwa, the more confused i am w everything. is it js me? maybe i shld js sit there like a good girl and accept wtv is happening in front of my eyes-- turn off my brain.
anw, these are js my thoughts, dont take too much offense in them, im js desperate to share my apprehension abt this manhwa...Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)
zawg lowk why they draw the princess so ugly... like i get shes sick and shes bawling her eyes out and everything but cmon.. why is her mouth so close to her eyes? maybe im js being picky but literally the rest of the women in this manhwa look fine, so why is it that she has her face squished together...
mc genuinely pmo, boy literally js raped u and u still wanna go in person, ALONE, and break up w him??? isnt the obv move to either bring someone w u or js settle things online...? like i get this is a damn story but this mc is so stupid... they say hes kind but i think hes just a total nimrod who has no self respect or preservation skills
honestly the concept is really good. A person who cant move on from their deceased lover and him coming back to comfort and motivate him to move forward in life, to not linger and waste his life in grief, before leaving. Its a good plot for such a short story like this. But rlly.... as much as I recognise that this is yaoi, there is too much smut. Its literally like 60% of the story ngl. I read through this in 10 minutes because i skipped all the sex and just read the plot. I think like every chapter except the first and the last had smut man its ridiculous. Within that 60% of the manhwa they couldve drawn in more scenes to further showcase how the mc couldnt bear to leave the dead ml and maybe a moment specially for the mc to realise he needs to move on and get over his dead bf but its instead all just sex. Its lowk such a waste of a plot.
This shouldve been a shounen ai. I'm not saying it cant be a yaoi, but for this type of story its best to be minimal with how much sex u draw in....











aghhh nooo bro this has so much potentiall im in agony w how this story ended. it was so abrupt?? i need side stories rn. there was horrible closure and i dont feel content w this ending at all. it feels like the author rushed the ending and tbh it rlly dropped the quality of this manga. omg im so like unfulfilled rn i cant even explain the feeling