reading this made me uncomfortable. i only read up to chapter 3, but i could already guess this will contain further scenes. Also, the bottom keep saying ‘stop,’ but is not even doing anything to literally stop him. He, instead, was feeling the pleasure. Sure, he was drunk, but it doesn’t even look like he lost all the energy from his body base on how he behave during the interaction.
and needless to say, top is so forceful about it, to the point it made me uncomfortable. Save your time using this review lol
art is good, plot is meh
ngl it was never mentioned that he didn't like/want to have sex with him TT It's just dirty talk i guess
nor was it mentioned that he liked it. and the fact that he was drunk and on top of that, the top was forceful of the segs is overwhelming. but sure, he never said he didn’t like it and it was merely dirty talk.
the gaping mouths, omg haha it’s like they don’t have teeth at all. artist could’ve just filled the gap with white background.
while reading, i sometimes get confused of whatever’s happening. every time a new scene pop-up, i get confused because there was no proper transition to each of scenes. idrk if i am wording it right, but i meant what i said.
it’s like reading something interesting and fun then suddenly getting confuse in the middle of the fun. nevertheless, i love the story
it kinda feels like the bottom is grooming the top. I know there’s more to what the eye meets, but at the moment, this is what i’m seeing haha
same boat here, I'm still questioning about their age gap and when I first saw their meet up I was like HELL NAH. but then again this trope is seen as normal nowಠ﹏ಠ
that’s a weird definition of ‘normal.’ yes, it is fantasy comic, but it still kind of disturbing to read these kind of stuff. but yea, i’ll at least be able to enjoy the art and plot if not the grooming stuff.
There's no grooming. Tei doesn't make any advances on Shuraka.
SPOILERS AHEAD IF YOU CARE
Shuraka sends Tei away for 10 - 12 years, Shuraka was about 12 so once they reunite, Shuraka is an adult. I believe they also don't have any contact while Tei is away
Idk if I can edit, but Tei doesn't make any advances on Shuraka when Shuraka is a child
This is actually a bit lacking for me. Don’t get me wrong. I like the story and all, but the seme and uke dating out of nowhere didn’t make sense at all. It’s like the author ran out of ideas on how to smooth it out or possibly because they lazily wrote this.
Yes, we want them see date. But in my defense, it did not justify the reason why the uke suddenly want to date the seme. Like, is the reason “i don’t want to lose him like this, so i’m gonna date him instead.” even enough?? then boom, their relationship is slowly blooming. For me, it’s not enough. There is something missing that the author could’ve done for, but even I can’t figure it out myself lol.
Anyway, this is just my take on this one. It also a minor concern (or maybe major, considering that I am talking about the development of their relationship.) Overall, I am enjoying the story, especially the uncensored smut scenes
it makes sense if you look at it from the angle of the uke being obsessed with the seme (non romantic at the time) and not wanting him to leave (due to uke's complex and trauma about being abandoned
at that point they'd already had sex so they were compatible in that sense, and the uke doesn't really seem to have super high standards for relationship labels
the way I see it, them getting together being rushed or not making sense tallies with the seme's insecurities in the following chapters; he also questions the validity of their "relationship"
babe, i get what you are saying, but the uke being what you call ‘obsessed’ is literally just looking out for him since seme was there when he wants family and he literally sees him as a little brother—nothing more, nothing less than this.
Also, if you’re talking about the trauma, again, it’s because he was concerned about the seme, albeit not in a romantic way, but in a brotherly way. He sees him as a brother he wants to take care of since seme has become attached with him anyway. He also adopted him purely because he noticed (probably) that seme’s calm when he is with uke even when it’s raining.
So yea, conclusion is, I don’t get any chemistry from them because their relationship bloomed out of nowhere.
but still, like what i’ve mentioned, i am enjoying the series. no hate, just my observation.
Thats the problem actually.
Like YunOh said, the Hyung is taking the shortcut, like giving a candy to a crying kid just so that he stop his tantrum, its very accurate imo.
He didnt think it through, and assume since YunOh like him, "okay fine, lets date so dont leave and keep beside me."
He didnt consider YunOh feeling and position enough and just do what he wants and 'believe' is right thing to do.
Thats why its so frustrating on YunOh side.
I mean, I would be mad and crying too if I were him.
So its not because 'The Author' did that, but because the 'Hyung character' would actually did that (hes got the char.development tho, of course)
it’s always the “it’s my first time” or “I have never done this before” and never that “leave your dick for me to ride. I’m much more experienced than you.”
sigh of disappointment. tired of this shit over and over again (plus the 200 chapters. meh), so i’m fucking out.
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i’m talking about the top being a community dick while the bottom is as virgin as Virgin Mary :)
and yes, the fact that it has already reached 200 chapters and it is still not over is already a kill for me. Yes, I know there are stories we wish it never ended, but there are also that needs to end; and even those we don’t wish to end, if the chapters keep piling up, we do tend to get bored reading, unless the story keeps you engaged.
I know my words are contradicting each other, but the main point of my comment is how slut the top is in their neighborhood and vice versa with the bottom.
Ohhh
is this actually good? i have never encountered a BL with 200 chapters. This is so new and I’m reluctant to read because I don’t want to waste my time hahaha
and yes, i’ve read the comments, but i just want some confirmation of how good this really is, considering that it has 200 chapters. it would take me some time to read it all at once and i don’t want to waste any of it
In my opinion it becomes boring quick, and wanted to ask do you know "19 Days" BL?
i do. it was a fun read, though i didn’t go through/deeper of it since i usually prefer smutty scenes. needless to say, i only ready manhwa
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THIS IS THE TROUPE I’VE LONGED TO READ. I always wanted to read a shorty top and tall bottom and this did NOT disappoint. If you are like me, who longed for the same thing, then you better read this!
Did he really just wait for him to grow up to make his advances?! because if he did, he really is disgusting. The author could’ve made them the same age or something with no memories at all. This makes him look like (or not even fucking like because he really is) a fucking pedophile no matter how the relationship moves on later.
it’s also the fact that on the second chapter, he was pushing himself on the poor, overwhelmed guy. idc how their relationship will go on, but this is seriously having an Eipstein vibe. yuckie
the title is live, laugh, love, but it’s definitely the opposite of laugh and love. This is so annoying, especially the lack of communication we get from Haru. As much as I want to binge read this, I choose not to continue reading this because for sure, I will get not just one misunderstanding from the start, but throughout the whole story.
I really hate these types of characters. It irks me to the core.