Boy, the comments comparing this to Killing stalking is so interesting. You guys overhype Killing Stalking poorly written plot to every fucking story about serial killers. Please let's not forget that KS is not the blueprint and there were other stories like KS before KS even existed.
This plot has nothing even remotely similar to KS, but most of you see "Stockholm syndrome " and scream KILLING STALKING ....news flash that's actually a word...and term...with actual meanings....
Not only is Goro showing to be a better-written character than sangwoo already, but he shows signs of a serial killer than actually has a motive to why he does things, unlike sangwoo who just went on a rampage whenever he felt like to hide who unstable he is, with Goro from reading, this man shows no signs of emotions or empathy and that's maybe why he doesn't understand that shot may feel sad from the stuff he says or he doesn't think about stuff he says because he doesn't have the ability to think like that or feels emotions regular humans would.
It shows that a lot of you read things and don't try to pull apart information, this BL says psychological for a reason. Use your brains people, think deeper than the picture before you.
Stop comparing stories.
Most of you are feeling sorry for the uke , shoto looks fine to me , he's getting his rent paid and getting fucked how he wants to, you guys need to READ, Goro told him to be calm like 3 times before he snapped at him, and Goro only snapped at him when shoto cursed at the man, clearly anyone would lose their cool , esp a full-on DOM . YALL ARE WILD. Not once did Goo put his hands on that boy , he just gave him some rough ass s*x which the UKE enjoyed cause he came so many damn times, I can tell a lot of you are children and def shouldn't be reading this if you think this is "TOXIC". Freaking weirdos. and yes IMMA attack any of you who comes for goro because yall are mad weird and wishy-washy and doing all this because he's not a full ASIAN SEME . Its very obvious.
boi...that man is a psycho i think ur too...
Obviously hes a psycho, HE LEGIT MURDERS PEOPLE LMAOO, are yall that slow.
My God ik he's a God damn psychopath but it seems that Ur taking that sangwoo wannabe side what the fuck is going on with Ur head u sound so mad anyways I'm sure that UKE liked having sex with him but that damn Walmart version of sangwoo only knows how to keep playing with someones feeling and u find that OK!!
from what ive read, this man would have most likely killed sangwoo LMAOOO but you can pop off .
um. being a dom doesn't excuse being a dick, i hope you're aware of that. i also hope you're aware you can still be raped regardless of getting physical enjoyment during. rape is simply the absence of consent, or even just a crossing of boundaries (in a sexual sense.) this whole paragraph you wrote is so cringe and honestly, kind of fucked up. their relationship isn't healthy, which by definition, can be considered, and is literally synonymous with, toxic. but go off calling people children and "too immature" for this work when you literally don't understand basic concepts.
Also this character reminds me nothing of sangwoo, you KS fans are so WEIRD . don't be mad your mans ended up in ASHES at the end of his story , killed by a granny . LMAOO
and this man is RICH , i doubt he will end up in ashes by end of his story LMAOO . go cry in a corner.
First of all, you clearly did not read the entire thing so I'm not even going to sit here and argue with you. Shoto did not get rape anyway in this entire 4 chapters that I have read, it's very obvious these two have an agreement in their sexual lives, which I'm sure the AUTHORS will show us in later chapters, so unlike you, I won't jump the boat and call this nowhere near toxic. You have some hardcore doms who talk to their subs like this and you have subs who love being degraded like this. Who are you to sit here and judge what shoto likes during intercourse and call it rape?? And you call me cringe LOL, listen to yourself. You guys want to make shoot into a victim so bad when he shows no signs of discomfort. IThe only person who don't understand basic concepts is you because you clearly lack the sense to read .
i did read the whole thing, just for your information. so now you seem like an assumer, and you know what they say about assuming. it makes an ass out of you and me, but in this case, mostly just you. and hon, i'm a seasoned switch. i've done genuine BDSM plays, i know what it SHOULD look like. and yeah, ofc there exists plays like this, but yk what also exists ? a downtime. a break. genuine aftercare. (and let's say sho is one of those hard, hardcore subs where they are in a situation were they are basically hand fed and taken care of to the max, there is still aftercare. aftercare is literally like one of THE most important things when it comes to BDSM. and yet, i have yet to see it ? except in the first chapter where goro just hugged him, a lot more could have been expanded there) and i never said shoto was raped; here you are, once again, looking like a dumbass. and you complained about ME not being able to read, sheesh.
literally, going off the information protrayed to us at this very moment, by the authors' themselves, it is very safe to say this isn't healthy. also, you do realize this is an affair, not even a relationship right ? and shoto is obviously mentally afflicted. especially concerning his "non-relationship" status with goro. and goro USES. THIS. AGAINST. HIM. seriously dick move. and hey, i'll give you the benefit of the doubt, maybe this was a previously discussed play (which for some reason wasn't shown to us ? that discussion ? for what reason ? shock factor ..?) and yet, goro LEAVES. when you say something like that, something potentially mentally/emotionally damaging to someone who was already previously unstable, that leaves fucking scars dude, you can't just leave them like that. you have to go back in and fix the mess you made. it can seriously fuck with people. hence, aftercare.
I read half of the paragraph and had to stop, because for one, it's literally 4 chapters, you sound insane. I am also into BDSM as well so let's not go there.
I would understand if you would make this judgment after like 25 chapters and no aftercare, but its just 4 chapters in and refuse to listen or argue with you.
very convincing that you think i'm "insane" for thinking (but it's really knowing, not thinking) that aftercare is important.
act fool, dude, act a fool :)
That man is a full-out psychopath and you expect aftercare from him.
Someone who lacks emotions is insanity in my opinion.
This BL is not for you honey.
I agree although the sene is very aggressive the uke doesn't hate it or complain. The reason yall are mad is cuz he has a girlfriend and he beat him with a belt without asking can i plz beat u with a belt which is kind of wewea but tney both have an understanding without words and the last part the seme got pissed he cold have beat the shit out of the uke instead he held his fists and when he finally got angry he fucked the uke in a way he new he would like it and that also helped him release his anger 2 birds one stone this aint a typical bdsm where they have strict rules and safe words but this is still toxic but for them its toxic in a good way not saying i agree with this relationship but i am saying yll cant come for the seme if the uke likes it to and we can see he does because after he was spanked by a fucking belt he asked to be fucked so this guy is correct
girl, are you stupid ? i'm merely saying why this isn't a healthy BDSM relationship. also by the way, just because you have Anti-Social Personailty Disorder, or a similar variation of it, doesn't mean you are incapable of being a nice person ? but i wouldn't have gathered that you knew that since you completely missed my entire message and assumed something i never said.
"this BL is not for you honey"
bitch this is child's play. this shit ain't even dark. but go off.
Its child play and not dark but you're triggered there isn't any aftercare LMAOOOO
you sound mad, want me to get you a pacifier????
sheeesh, the foolishness that you let yourself type. you're the one writing multiple comments about this work, in caps, berating anyone who thinks the opposite of you. and i'm triggered ? oh honey baby child, what's it like being so stupid ?
Who the fuck broke you, listen hun I bet u really are fun at parties, don't go around and release Ur anger cause you had a bad day and it's sad how u assumed I would simp over a psychopath and it's the fact that u thought mentioning KS makes me a fan of it. It seems u read ks too I guess Ur just a weirdo who doesn't go outside or touch grass cause of how fast u replied anyways Im not here to argue with a 12 yrs old. Have the day u deserve lol
This ain't a romance genre dumbass
Thank you very much! I felt as though I was speaking to a bunch of little kids. They are only mad at Goro because he has a girlfriend .
They came into the story expecting Goro to be a soft dom , when he's not, they start to call the man toxic , No dom asks their subs before punishing them if they want to be punished. They ask the sub why they are going to get punished and the sub answers, clearly knowing they did something wrong. Which was what happened between shoto and Goro.
Just from reading this I can already tell the uke is a Masochist.
You sound stupid as fuck lmao, I am not even going to bring age into this, I don't need to touch grass to see that you're a dumbass for even bringing up KS .
and yes I can tell that you would simp for someone like that, it's very obvious.
sheesh, this dismissing of age really shows how young you actually are. and this "no dom asks before punishment" is literally such bullshit, please stop spreading this atrociously wrong BDSM etiquette. and this is actually why people have misconceptions about how BDSM actually works. cause of dumbasses like you thinking they know shit just cause they read some comics and fanfics, and maybe had their bf or gf, or whoever the fuck, choke them once.
bestie are you out of your fucking mind, imagine calling someone stupid because they mentioned another character, he/she/they or whatever hell your pronounce is do you really think the reason i told you to touch grass is to see that I'm adumbass, how can you go touch grass to see a dumbass for bringing up KS, fix your grammer first. i like arguing but arguing with stupid people is just a waste of time anyways I decided to not respond to your bad grammer cause i go outside which u don't... i don't simp for drawings on paper.. that's for wierdos like you, and i'm saying this again so your small brain can understand I'm not gonna respond to u again so replying to me would just be waste of energy and time, just saying. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Exactly sometimes ppl just have to stop looking at things as if they are fairy-tales life aint that preety guys and even in boyfriend girlfriend relationships people dont ask if they can fuck it a relationships so we both no wats going to happen
Honestly, they just get into it, unless the other party says no, they don't want to. I refuse to go back and forth with these fools over BDSM. Like yall are freaking delusional, I am a grown adult, bringing up age into a conversation cause you got called out on your bullshit is wild.
Dumbass, you're literally telling me to go outside and touch grass when we are both here on an illegal site, arguing about a fictional story. Do you know how dumb you look? That's exactly my point and you're talking about my grammar when it's literally better than yours. You're the one who brought up KS and got mad because you got called out for looking stupid, lmao. Couldn't be me thats for sure.
Please, I don't need to tell you my age, I am very much a grown adult, only children bring up age in debates/ disagreements. I refuse to take a lecture from you about BDSM when I've been in the game for a long period of time, again you don't know my age or sexual experience. You're sitting there trying to put a label on how BDSM should be, like what? Everyone's relationship is different, just because it doesn't go how you want it to go, doesn't mean it's wrong, you sound delusional like I said.
Again you're just mad because you didn't get the aftercare you wanted from this character.
gosh, you are just a delusional little young thing aren't you ? have you never interacted with an adult as well ? sheesh. you don't get out much, huh ?
if you think i'm in any way upset or mad, you realy must not have picked up on any social cues or have any emotional intelligence. kinda sad :/
Not yall calling Goro toxic for just having rough sex which the uke clearly consents to, but idolize Seugnho[whatever the fuck his name is] for literally raping and kidnapping his uke. Let's not forget the other semes that yall IDOLIZE that legit r*pes and treats their ukes like trash. Yall are so wishy-washy when they semes aren't Asians. HA! It shows that yall don't observe the things you read. All I see is a very hard dom and sub relationship here.
Thx for saying it
PERIODDDDDDDDDD
I find it weird that everyone is making shoto out to be this helpless victim bottom that he might actually not be, if you observe his actions and how he speaks he clearly isn't as soft as you guys want to make him out to be.
to add to this, he's literally the son of a yakuza boss...i doubt he's soft..yall keep forgetting that .
He’s not soft, he’s just….abused
Goro never abused him from what ive read, so what are you talking about
That's part of of the play. I actually think that they like each other but beyond common sense hahha... The way they love each other might be different to the love that people who have dont have background about a Dom/sub relationship. What I m waiting now is the murder part. Who's the killer? Who's the victim hahaha probably the guy that the seme saw last time hahha
goro is the serial killer. he's just a mere basketball player in the day tho
Thanks for the info. I missed the prologue and started at chap 1 so i didnt knew it.