Sussana

Temptation, is it bl?

Oops I got the title wrong, it was "Secretive XX" lol yes, it's a BL and it was so good, it had a lot of potential but it turned out to be a short story that ended way too abruptly.

I want to try, is it worth it even it ended abruptly?

Imo it is, it had a great concept.

i think its just a reader error .. makes sense to me

Mangago deleted the rest of my comment after the emoji I put after those lines ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ it was only a critique because I do like the concept of this manhwa, I'm interested in the characters' past and I like their dynamic. But the pace is very clunky, the dialogues feel empty, not just vague, they feel empty and sometimes the cuts are too abrupt. There are ways to make this feel like an amnesiac patient's POV, and I don't think there's anything wrong with saying that the author is probably a beginner since the art so far is better than the script. There were other users that said they didn't like the sex scenes because there was no chemistry/feelings/connection, and I actually liked those scenes because MC technically didn't feel anything for ML at that moment, he was just trying to find a human connection. That showed potential, and again, I don't think there's anything wrong to point out some flaws we see.

It’s not like you are disappointed after paying for it. Remember some are beginners to storytelling too. Be satisfied with what you got or just stop reading.

Try doing this yourself then you’ll know how much effort goes into each panels and dialogues especially if it’s an original story.

Why are some of you so allergic to reading some criticism? It's not even as if I'm shitting on it, I mentioned the things I do like and the things I didn't like, the author won't even read my comment and I was never really mean.