Could this artist go take storytelling lessons and re do this manhwa from the beginning? Or take advice from an experienced author
i think its just a reader error .. makes sense to me
Mangago deleted the rest of my comment after the emoji I put after those lines ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ it was only a critique because I do like the concept of this manhwa, I'm interested in the characters' past and I like their dynamic. But the pace is very clunky, the dialogues feel empty, not just vague, they feel empty and sometimes the cuts are too abrupt. There are ways to make this feel like an amnesiac patient's POV, and I don't think there's anything wrong with saying that the author is probably a beginner since the art so far is better than the script. There were other users that said they didn't like the sex scenes because there was no chemistry/feelings/connection, and I actually liked those scenes because MC technically didn't feel anything for ML at that moment, he was just trying to find a human connection. That showed potential, and again, I don't think there's anything wrong to point out some flaws we see.
It’s not like you are disappointed after paying for it. Remember some are beginners to storytelling too. Be satisfied with what you got or just stop reading.
Try doing this yourself then you’ll know how much effort goes into each panels and dialogues especially if it’s an original story.
Why are some of you so allergic to reading some criticism? It's not even as if I'm shitting on it, I mentioned the things I do like and the things I didn't like, the author won't even read my comment and I was never really mean.
Teasun viejito this can't be I never thought I would love this story so much. They're so precious, this family has my whole heart forever.
Ugh I know the writing is very sub par but I really want to know more about their past. I do like their dynamic and it's such a shame that this doesn't have a better structure, flow and pace.
This novel is so bad, but the smut chapters were my guilty pleasure lmao. Those scenes, the final chapters and the side stories were the only stuff I reread. And obviously the manhua artstyle is top tier, everything else was trash.
This manhwa is such a gem omg, quickly climbed up my favorites list (since Office Hero got kind of slow lately).
Still all in all, the plot is solid, the characters and their backgrounds are so good, and the best thing ever, there's no sex every two chapters (づ￣ ³￣)づ
How is it that casual intimacy (on a sexual level) is so rare that it feels like I've never seen anything like the bathroom scene before?? Like I'm genuinely like how is this not common?
The panel of them holding hands reflected in the water is the most beautiful yet <3
Thank you dindin! I wonder how much of a thing will be the saved contact thing, Taeyoung saved Jinwoo just like he did with all of his regular fuck buddies, but eventually it has to become more special.
Come on, this can't end like Temptation XX right?? Please author don't be cruel, I was already so happy by the implications that Taeyoung is not fooling around anymore, why destroy my heart like that at the end T.T
Temptation, is it bl?
Oops I got the title wrong, it was "Secretive XX" lol yes, it's a BL and it was so good, it had a lot of potential but it turned out to be a short story that ended way too abruptly.
I want to try, is it worth it even it ended abruptly?
Imo it is, it had a great concept.