There a way to many time skips. I just cant read something if i blink twice and the MC is already 17 and on a Journey. He was Born just one Chapter befor! Why even bother then? Show us a flashback instead that has the same energy. If you dont mind stuff like that then go ahead and read it. You might like it.
There a way to many time skips. I just cant read something if i blink twice and the MC is already 17 and on a Journey. He was Born just one Chapter befor! Why even bother then? Show us a flashback instead that has the same energy.
If you dont mind stuff like that then go ahead and read it. You might like it.