There a way to many time skips. I just cant read something if i blink twice and the MC is already 17 and on a Journey. He was Born just one Chapter befor! Why even bother then? Show us a flashback instead that has the same energy. If you dont mind stuff like that then go ahead and read it. You might like it.
There a way to many time skips. I just cant read something if i blink twice and the MC is already 17 and on a Journey. He was Born just one Chapter befor! Why even bother then? Show us a flashback instead that has the same energy.
If you dont mind stuff like that then go ahead and read it. You might like it.
Yeah the time skip is terrible,, bro is a kid in the firsts chapters then 17, we barely see how he was trained for magic, and what about his family