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The Fl has been pissing me off the past couple chapters but even the ml was stupid in this chapter too. I get why she would insist on going back to the villa, but why in the world did she not wait for her husband to come back before blindly trusting her former ex best friend WHO'S ALREADY TRIED TO KILL HER ONCE. And then how was the ml going to find the secret safe if he didn't bring her along, because I'm sure she wouldn't have told him where it was without being able to go back to her childhood home.
Also for them to be like "oh we're one step of it ahead of Beles and the traitors", only for them to get caught EVERY. SINGLE. TIME. when the fl is involved is so damn annoying. Whoever put the "strong female lead" tag on this needs to be smacked on their foreheads, because in no way is she actually strong when she's constantly depending on everyone else to get her out of the situation that SHE PUTS HERSELF IN. Like if she's going to be a weak fl, at least let her be smart instead of constantly putting herself in danger like a dumbass toddler who can't be patient enough to not get themselves possibly killed. 5/5 -->3/5
OMFG SHE'S SO FUCKING STUPID!!
You are an unmarried woman still in the same country as your psycho ex-fiance who is still currently looking for you and who you know is powerful enough to hurt every single person around you to get to you and YOU CHOOSE TO KEEP HIS BABY?!?!? In what world would keeping that thing ever be a good idea?? Especially since you're young and pretty, YOU COULD ALWAYS FIND ANOTHER HUSBAND WHO COULD GIVE YOU A CHILD THAT IS NOT THE SPAWN OF FUCKING SATAN! Bro poor Gale is about to get killed because of him protecting her and the little demon growing inside her and you know she's only going to feel guilty about it for like 4 chapters before that psycho whispers in her ear that it had to be done. And guess what? SHE'LL LISTEN TO HIM LIKE THE BIRD BRAIN SHE IS. Bro I'm just going to drop this, I'm already on several medications that elevate my blood pressure and this work might actually fuck it up more
thank you sm for writing this!! since you literally said what i wanted to say my anger calmed down as i read your post lmfaoo. but fls like this annoy me so much omfgod. i remember reading the first few chapters and thinking "she's not my type but maybe im being too hard on her" i should've dropped it then i swear. but i hate the ml more and i hate that he will get away with everything!!!
YEESSSS. I'm glad my rant helped you And you know he is literally going to get away with everything he's done and will do. Atp I'm only reading the comments rather than reading the chapters so I don't go insane. And same. I should've dropped this when she started ignoring not only his red flags, but his black flags too
Abortions in her time period were all back alley and dangerous. She could die if she got one.
I don't blame her for keeping the pregnancy.
I do think she should be getting out of the country asap though. It's too dangerous to be so close by
Lol you said it all, I'm so stressed out I don't want Gale to die just to move the plot. He doesn't deserve it jfc. Just let this end with the FL moving on with her life as a single lady doing her hobbies and having a nice job to finance herself UGHHHH
Getting rid of the baby would mean loosing a lot of readers and potentially risking bring cancelled or even hate attacks. It's a very loaded topic.
Romance genre readers are vicious if they don't like something.