I read the 2nd part as well.
The art is beautiful but I kept thinking "Kageyama is even more obtuse in this than usual."
Tbh Kageyama is cruel in this. Thankfully I don't believe he would act like this canonically. The way he acts here is much colder and calmer than he usualy does. No excitement, no being a happy idiot , just-- cold. Cruel. And utterly obtuse as he cannot even see what he truly wants.
Koyoma was a great original character and despite him and Hinata not having smth as special as Hinata and Kageyama do, I found myself rooting for him and his happiness.
I understand kagehina has smth deeper than what Koyoma was feeling, but the way Kageyama went about the whole thing as if he was above it all made him less likeable.
In any case, thank u to the creator for putting in so much effort and thought into this story. The art is next level gorgeous
i wholeheartedly agree with this. really, like i cannot imagine kageyama being this cold, like sure he expresses his feelings less openly than hinata, but here, he's just devoid of such emotions and i really can't imagine him that way. the way he compared hinata to a dog, and said hinata has no choice but to come to him, i don't think kageyama would be like that. he's just as insecure, timid as hinata. he may express less, but he feels the same, he's on the same wavelength as hinata, which is why i think they connect so much aaaaaa but the art was good ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Tbh I don't want them to end up together. I want kim dan's grandma to die, him to move out and leave jaekyung and jk to suffer and die. this would be a very satisfying story for me if jaekyung suffered a LOT and then died
That would be realistic. Down for that! Ik Dan loves his grandma sm but in a way it'll be realistic plus he'll eventually move on. It'll be like Dan removing his shackles from all the debt, overworking and being Jaekyung's hole also emotionally being drained constantly by the stress of having a love one in hospital. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍ For better or worst. I want him to grow a spine, know his worth, have a whole Chara development after his grandma's ded & torture Jaekyung sm that he becomes incapable of even entering the ring! That'll satisfy me.







this is so joongdok coded heheh >.<
But that's besides the point. In any case I enjoyed this quite a lot. It was a touching story