The foundation for Ian's obsession with Benjamin feels janky. I think the manhwa could have solidified their (fucked up) relationship further by giving both of them more time to expound on their similarities. Like, their connection feels so shallow to me because Ian and Ben are conveniently written to embrace one another so abruptly. It wouldn't hurt to slow down the pace a bit. I don't even wanna start with Ben—I don't think I need to it's kinda obvious. Ik this manhwa is porn first before the plot but I can't ignore the writing anymore.
every interaction Aiden has with Seth makes me close the site out of embarrassment. this parasocial mf
Touru got no self-respect but I can't really say anything against him because I'm lowkey the same like give me a Yakumo I'd sell myself too damn.
That was anti-climactic. I didn't expect it to end so soon, I thought the series had several timelines? Anyway, does anyone know where I can read the novel?