Tbh it didn’t feel as rushed as it could have been more like it ended after a lot of climatic build up and drama and no time to wind down from this epic- well sometimes brutal-journey we’ve been through with the main couple. I do think with the eventual side chs, the story will seem more well rounded and give us that full sigh of relief and relaxation we all need. And hopefully some more potato lolol.
Am I the only one who sees a direct parallel to the older sisters romance and how Lili’s went down. I’m hope that was the authors intention not just a fluke. If intentional foreshadowing that makes for a good device to prep the reader but if accidental. It means that they didn’t know how else to handle the harem aspect besides how they handled it with the older sister. Either way I really did like guessing who each of the girls was going to get with. I like the idea of moving past a first love not too many stories do it.
Honestly I think the two sisters handled the harems very differently. Like the older sis had cordial relationships with all of them and constantly ignored there feelings to keep the friendships going. But lili always drew a line and with two of her men lowk neglecting her josh was the only right answer but idk.
I agree they handled the harem differently but I feel like the end result was the same. I really hoped that there wouldn’t be a member of the harem that completely left because of hurt like in Micheal’s case for the older sister. But Aiden did the same thing even when Lily was pretty clear. I guess I just hopped for Lily she would be able to still be friends with all the suiters as her sister didn’t really have that when she chose cedric.
If anyone (like myself) was way more invested in the main couples love story … I wrote down the chs that include them being the main focus and or awesome/ cute moments
Ch 1-38 (they’re the focus)
65 (cuteness trust me)
72-75 (came back into focus for some resolution/wrap up)
When I re read this I’ll probably just be in it for their relationship y and journey










Ch 45-46 ish
Now this might just be a me thing but why so many people who don’t have to take birth control be hating on those who do?
I have had plenty a man tell me as a female that birth control is bad and I shouldn’t take it, but are they gonna be responsible and wear protection …no…
Ugh and now alphas are saying it to omegas in omegaverse. Like bro you don’t have to worry about getting pregnant.
Sorry that’s my soap box it just triggers me when someone decides what’s bad for your body when they don’t even have those baby growing parts, in real world or omegaverse.
Not to say I don’t like this story tho, I’m quieter enjoying it - this was just a tangent