This wld have been real good if the mc didn't look like a 10 yr old
Don't get me wrong guys, it's not a bad story, and actually it's good! But I feel like the pacing is a bit of a letdown. It wldve been better if the ending/conflict was more fleshed out instead of rushing it.
This wld have been real good if the mc didn't look like a 10 yr old