Don't get me wrong guys, it's not a bad story, and actually it's good! But I feel like the pacing is a bit of a letdown. It wldve been better if the ending/conflict was more fleshed out instead of rushing it.
They tried brainwashing the readers w the sappy cutesy half, but I WON'T FORGET, I SHALL NEVER FORGET HOW MUCH OF AN A-HOLE HE IS, HE ALMOST GOT SAEIN GANG AND TRIED DROWNING HIM, NOT TO MENTION WE SKIMMED OVER THE FACT THAT HE LITERALLY ETCHED HIS NAME IN SAEIN'S BACK!!! IT WAS NOT ADDRESSED PROPERLY. Like genuinely, the author was high as a cloud when they made this. The biggest fucking bird and the biggest fucking bastard got together lol I hated this, I only stuck till the end to give my honest feedback.
reading this comment as someone who haven't started reading ts is lowkey making me pained cause the art style is SO beautiful
actually nvm, i looked at more pictures, the art style reminds me of that one satirical bl where the guy puts his foot on the other guy's face and the guy falls in love.
fr turned him into a crybaby at the end to win us back but he never felt bad while abusing saein
HELP this was exactly my thought…
At ch 43, the author's other story characters showed up lol!! I also recommend reading that (Triangle Lovers) it's real good, did not expect to see them HAHA
I DIDNT EVEN RESLIZE
Decided to read sumn at 11pm even tho I have work at 5am...I should have gone to sleep instead.
I genuinely felt like there was so much dialogue on jeonghan that we never really explored iljo's deepest conscience. And also some parts felt lacking(?)in a sense that they would either bring up new characters/plot with no introduction and wld just drop them for no reason (i.e. iljo's barista friend)like bruh, that was it? No further updates on the guy?? Going back to my other point, there were just random facts that got included w no proper backstory or a finished/polished answer, likeee the whole thing w jongin/iljo who we don't ACTUALLY know who told the truth of whether they had s3x or nah, or do we just have to take Iljo's word? Since considering Iljo's track record for being honest...it's hard to believe that what he was saying is the truth, for all we know he's just covering it up to not make jeonghan worry, that's all. Overall, I give the story a solid 6.5/10, some parts were good, but the story felt dragging esp. With Jeonghan's chasing arc and Iljo's resolve or lack thereof.
I mean... The cousin even admitted that he just said that and that Iljo was strangely picky and wouldn't "put out" for him so I believe we can be sure that Iljo never slept with him and he basically beat on him cause he wouldn't... The cousin is real trash when you figure out that he thinks Iljo is his cousin and still wants to sleep with him...
This wld have been real good if the mc didn't look like a 10 yr old