Just my POV but this could’ve been such a wholesome story if the author had executed it better. I genuinely love the scary seme and cute uke trope but here the seme felt like he was all about lust. And I always get the ick when the actual victim ends up victimising the perpetrator. The seme literally forced a kiss on him and the uke is the one apologising to him later like wtf .
This was such a good read!! I'm in love with both couples. This is the first yaoi where I genuinely can't choose a favourite. Yoshida also has yuri potential and I'm here for it. I don't get the hate. Reading yaoi and then bringing morality into it is insane. You're choosing to read this. Nobody's forcing you so maybe stick to cartoons if you can't handle complex characters and relationships. Treat fanfiction as fanfiction!! And yeah I loveeee this.
It was good but I felt like something was missing. I would’ve loved to see the process of Shizume slowly coming out of his shell and opening up in front of his parents or even starting to show more PDA with his uke. But I also understand his situation. Not everyone is the same and everyone has their own pace when it comes to dealing with things. A simple-minded uke and a complex seme dynamic isn’t everyone’s cup of tea so I can understand the criticism in the comments. That said I’m not defending the compromises and adjustments the uke had to make for the seme either.
This is a MASTERPIECE. I need this to get adapted into a Japanese BL series real soon because this has SO MUCH POTENTIAL. I love every single character. The MC, ML, side couples, EVERYONE has so much going on in their lives. And the fact that we even have old men yaoi?? I'm genuinely curious about their story too. Omaeda being a bottom was a whole plot twist for me no kidding. Ken and Kirara are literally the cutest ML and MC I could've ever asked for. GOD TIER COUPLE. Everything about them is just so peak. LEGIT PEAK BL. I'm also curious to see how the story is going to end.











Crazily PEAK.