Ray is so unlikable I can’t imagine why he has feelings for him like okay he took care of you as a child but you’re an adult no and he kind of treats you like leftovers I can’t imagine being so desperate for a person’s affection that I’ll take these shitty crumbs
Is it just me or did the top’s face get twinkified
This is lowkey fucking boring like what’s the plot? He wants to get his divk wet?
The ending is so lame and the tops don’t even kiss once? How is that a throuple?
This is so weird like his zombie brother or whatever scares me also I thought he was an omega so Im, confused?
There’s so many side plots going on at the same time that it’s now impossible for me to make sense of the main plot and i genuinely don’t understand anything anymore all I know is that the brown haired guy is fuckimg hot and i want them to be together
Bro this keeping secrets shit and the miscommunication is getting old
They’re both so unlikable it actually makes me sick also the bottom being built like a literal toothpick is such a turn off
The bottom is so annoying I literally can’t help but skip his internal monologue cause like sometimes it’s better to stfu
The person writing this having an obvious foot fetish and shoving it everywhere is actually insane
I’m gonna be so real with you I skip his internal monologue every time bro overthinks every single thing it stresses me out

















