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This had so much angst potential, like 15 more chaps of insecurity would’ve been perfect
15 chapters are too long maybe 5-8 are ok.. but i enjoy it when ml and fl know how to communicate instead of letting misunderstandings continue.
I can compromise on 8… I really wish they went more into depth about the imprisonment arc feelings and both of their abandonment issues :( this was a fun and short story tho
Well I agree with you. I wanna see more about their backstory, trauma bonds, etc.
The story world is so interesting, I wish we learned more about it! Like reincarnators, dragons, the labyrinth, ascension magic, etc… It was a smooth read tho
You can read the spin off "The snake who swallowed the pomegranate" for more lore of this world. It's currently an ongoing manhwa here, or just pick up the novels, by the same name they are both completely translated.