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I thought Jeremy was jealous of Shuri at the beginning because Shuri was the last one to see Johannes to do his will and that he died at midday. How come he suddenly dropped dead with dramatic thunder?
did it change or am I just annoyed and bitter because I miss her old eyes and cartoony expressions and a ton of other picky stuff
no problem with consistency since he survived his bout of illness then
So he didn’t die? Just went up & missing & left another guy in the casket??!? I know I’m misinterpreting this so bad so I’ll just shut up now and read
we're talking about ch.96 right? No Johan didn't die he survived the night..that's why in the next chapter we see him waking up with Shuri by his side.
Yup a reread would definitely be worthwhile
Alrighty thanks for the tip!
*jaw drops to floor, eyes pop out of sockets accompanied by trumpets, heart beats out of chest, awooga awooga sound effect, pulls chain on train whistle that has appeared next to head as steam blows out, slams fists on table, rattling any plates, bowls or silverware, whistles loudly, fireworks shoot from top of head, wipes comically large bead of sweat from forehead, clears throat, straightens tie, combs hair* splendid read.